Reviews for Connecting the Dots
Pyrinsomniac chapter 8 . 5/24/2010
CRACKTASTIC. I freaking love this.

More Superman cowering away from Lois, please. And Lois- Hinata interaction... they play off each other so well.

Hmm. I wonder what Batman would think of their stealth abilities if he could see genjutsu and some of the ninjutsu at work.

Your Shino is cracking me up, with the "Why?" Sai, too.

Umm, by "coming war" Shino means against Madara and the remnants of Akatsuki, right?

Hmm. Sasuke wouldn't know about security cameras. Could they track him that way?

Question plus Kiba plus Huntress equals comic gold. I'm glad you were able to exploit that to its full potential.

I think you handled the hospital scene between Naruto and Hinata just right. You explained just enough to let us know what they- well, mostly Hinata- were thinking, but not so much that it was boring. And having it interrupted gives you more time to build tension or the option of leaving it alone.

So, Naruto was almost to Shikamaru when an unknown chakra wielder teleported behind him and hit him hard enough to send him flying out into Metropolis?

Aww. Why do I get the feeling Green Arrow's going to acquire a Lee- shaped puppy for the next while?

So, I've been wondering- was it just Hinata who could speak English with no explanation, or was Neji also able to? And I'm betting that has something to do with the weird white light telling her to "Speak," and the redheaded man in the park, and the green glint in her eye when she touched Ino and imparted English to her. And why Hinata was found at a different place than it seemed like she should've been. Also I bet all that's tied in to whoever hijacked Kakashi's jutsu, and Naruto's unknown assailant.

Now it's just Shikamaru and TenTen they have to find, isn't it? I'm guessing either Shikamaru or Sakura will figure out what Kakashi did but question the size of it, just like Shikaku.

I'm just wondering where poor Akamaru is. And gleefully anticipating the expressions when everybody sees a horse sized dog. And I'm wondering if we're going to get a scene where the ninjas are sparring, or they're turned loose to go find the others, and the metas get to see a little more of what they can do.

Are Robin and Raven still stuck in Sasuke's jutsu?

For that matter, I'm wondering about the little things that've been amiss with the ninjas... I can understand that the DC universe wouldn't have natural chakra and the laws of physics probably operate a little differently- like Sasuke not being able to control his dragon like he should have- but there were other little things, that I can't remember right now, that struck me as odd. Another Foreboding Sign?

Speaking of foreboding signs (ha, ha... I'm so sorry, that was awful,) why is Hinata the one the really odd stuff is happening to, like all the language brouhaha? Just like Kakashi, something seems to be using her toward unknown ends. I'm a little worried for my girl... but glad she's getting some attention.

Oh God. Madara and Luthor aren't colluding, are they? Geesh, all that insanity in one room... add in Sasuke and you could have a deranged villain convention.

Whaddaya mean, "past contacts" between the worlds? Just those oddities like the arm and explosion, or is there something else?

Haha! Oh, Hinata and Lois as roommates. Please. It'd be like the Odd Couple.

So: Hinata, Kiba, Shino, Sai, Naruto, Sakura, Ino, Chouji, Lee,and Neji are all in the JL Tower in Metropolis, right? Luthor has Shikamaru, TenTen and Karin in an unknown location, Suigetsu and Juugo are captured and in JL custody, and Sasuke's on the lam, probably in or around Jump City. Correct?

Aww, where's Akamaru? Throw me a bone here! (... I'm so sorry. I'll stop with the horrific puns.)

I really like this story and can't wait for your next update.
baynard chapter 8 . 5/23/2010
Ah great update, can't wait to see more.
1WiththeButterfly chapter 8 . 5/23/2010
Dear god! this is TOO good. I mean, sometimes people get awarded the Golden Ladybug award by me, Sometimes they win the Internet from others, hell sometimes they win reality!

This, kinda outshined them all.

I mean, you've just created a crossover of such a magnitude that I'm quaking in my boots. This is easily some of the Best fanfiction I've ever seen.

Superman V Naruto, Batman V Sasuke, not so much Wonder Woman V Sakurateam. All of this is just amazing, the level of detail is massive. the fights legendary, the destruction immense. This is making my day at least twice as awesome as it was before (And I've just watched a new episode of Doctor Who as well)

But, I should probably calm down a bit, and start making some guesses (As is my habit).

To start with, I'm gonna have a gander as to whats been making life difficult for our naruto-verse-ians. Big clues come from sasuke's fight against batman, where he has trouble maintaining his fire jutsu in the water, and his lightnig around the metal. So, this leads me to believe that the universe is trying to fight back against these things that are happening. Fire doesn't just ignore water in this world, metal conducts electricity and people shouldn't be able to make seals and have the reactions that they do. Hell, the only reason supes is still alive right now is because of that.

It all comes down to the physics the DC Universe works on, but the Narutoverse doesn't.

Second theory, basically who punched naruto out of luthor's facility, while treating the sage mode like a joke. I'm not too well versed in the DCAU, but I'm fairly certain the big event that killed off luthor was that darksied tried to merge with him, flash went all speed-force on his ass, and ripped the two apart. Since you say the manner of his death is gonna be important, Imma guess that your saying that they weren't quite as ripped apart as we think.

And, I'm not really sure at the level of superstrength darksied has access too, but I'm gonna take a guess and say its bigger than Superman's.

Okay, anything else I need to go on about? Oh yeah, the numbers dont add up. you've been saying that there was 18 dimension hoppers, 1 a dog. With the Konoha 11, Sai and Team Taka, we have 16 and Akamaru makes 17. That leaves a slot open. It wasn't kakashi, and apparently thats the sum of who was there or not. which means someone else came through.

And that unidentifed someone is coming in second place for person who punched naruto out onto the streets of metropolis...

Well, I think thats enough for now, I've stretched the limits of my mind enough for the day.

Cant wait till the next update, and the awesomness it promises to bring
Velshard chapter 8 . 5/22/2010
LMAO Excellent, I find the bits pertaining to Kiba and Sai especially entertaining. I wonder what Hinata's strange power is though, since I don't have as much knowledge of the DC universe as some people I can't even begin to guess what that's about.


Neji, Rank: Jonin, Clanhead: No

Shikamaru, Rank: Jonin, Clanhead: Yes

Hinata, Rank: Chunin, Clanhead: Yes

Kiba, Rank: Chunin, Clanhead: No

Shino, Rank: Chunin, Clanhead: Yes

Tenten, Rank: Chunin, Clanhead: No

Lee, Rank: Chunin, Clanhead: No

Ino, Rank: Chunin, Clanhead: Yes

Chouji, Rank: Chunin, Clanhead: Yes

Sakura, Rank: Chunin, Clanhead: No

Sai, Rank: ? , Clanhead: ?

Naruto, Rank: Genin, Clanhead: ?

That's just my count but who are the three prisoners Flash spoke of?

BTW it also occurred to me that according to Chinese mythology all living things have Chakras, even the non-living to some degree, so does that not apply in the DC universe or is it that the chakras of people here are so under developed that they only seem like they have none?

Anyways great chapter and I eagerly await the next one.
mfmxxx chapter 8 . 5/22/2010
I really like this, and i;m hoping Naruto will still be the same main character, if you've read the recent manga eps, i hope you have Naruto be as mature as he is in them, here.
Kattz Sync chapter 8 . 5/22/2010
I have to say, this story is amazing!
Baron von Nobody chapter 8 . 5/21/2010
I loved the three fight scenes, they were indeed wickedly awesome. The fact that Batman was forced to remove his cowl speaks volumes for Sasuke skill, but that was indeed a victory for Batman in the end. You definately proved that though Sakura is strong, she is not as strong as Wonder Woman, and I almost forgot about that weakness of Wonder Woman's involving her lasso, how embarressing. I have to hand it to Naruto, to make Superman bleed is impressive in it's own right.

Finally, most of the gang is back together again. So you are using that DC universe storyline. In that case, I would have to guess that the super strong guy who first knnocked Naruto for a loop would be Darkside. But that would mean that Darkside and Luthor have discovered the Anti-Life equation. Now things have escalated to some pretty deep shit. This is getting really good. Please continue when you can.


Mr. Nobody
Orihime-San chapter 8 . 5/21/2010



Out of all the Naruto and JL crossovers ever made this one is the most realistic one of them all!




supremebandit chapter 8 . 5/21/2010
the chapter is great, and since i don't have much advice to give someone whos better than me, good luck with the next chapter...
Feldoran chapter 8 . 5/21/2010
Another great chapter I assure you, Hinata's weird ability is kinda odd but it's cool. This is turning into one of my favorite stories on here by far. Can't wait to see what's next or what they'll do with Suigetsu.
Anne Camp aka Obi-quiet chapter 8 . 5/21/2010
*Is still laughing about the Green Spandex, That really should say a lot right there.* Excellent chpater! :D Sorry for the short review.
guest chapter 8 . 5/21/2010
Awesome! Props for the quick updates, keep'em comin'! ;)
Bobboky chapter 8 . 5/20/2010
Merklin chapter 8 . 5/20/2010
I found this story while looking for DC crossovers and...I love it, lol.

I noticed some people complaining about problems in your fights, but they don't seem that unreasonable to me. If you stop and consider the angles anyway.

I like the fact that you didn't underpower or OVERpower Naruto, and without underpowering Superman, who DIDN'T go all out. I mean, let's face it: the guy can knock planets out of orbit, heh heh.

Anyways, the story is great so far, and I'm very much looking forward to the next chapter. Another DC crossover I'm reading, Spectrum, might have some competition on which I like better, but I'll just have to wait and see. Whichever I like better, it doesn't change the fact that this one is still awesome.
yarra chapter 8 . 5/20/2010
I agreed with Sakura, what the hell is wrong with superheroes? I mean, come ON! Spandex? Really? Even Joker has a better taste than that!
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