Reviews for A Failing Heart
pastelroses chapter 7 . 12/27/2010
Wow I think this is one of your best chapters to date! I loved how you described Bella's emotion and the meadow scene! Your so sweet for writing about me, I am glad I inspire you, you inspire me! Thanks to you too! Hope to read more soon!

taralynn09 chapter 7 . 12/27/2010
Loved it! Update soon please!
pastelroses chapter 6 . 12/23/2010
Oh I like it! I hope she ends up with Edward not Jacob! Keep it up!
abstergos chapter 6 . 12/5/2010

taralynn09 chapter 6 . 12/5/2010
Aww, wish she would have gone after edward. Loved it! Update soon please!
pastelroses chapter 5 . 5/23/2010
Aw thanks for the shout out at the beginning, I appreciate it and if you need any more inspiration I am here! Wow, I think this is my fav chapter! Wow, loved Jake kissing Bella and Bella and Edward finally kissing, that was cute! But what a cliffhanger, way to keep me waiting! Great job, the best one yet! Keep it up!
Pugi18 chapter 5 . 5/23/2010
Great start! Your getting the personalities of the characters right.
pastelroses chapter 4 . 5/20/2010
Oh I like what you have done with the story! Nice job! I like it! Keep it up, can't wait for more!
pastelroses chapter 3 . 5/5/2010
Oh I really liked this chapter! Poor Bella! I actually like Jake in this chapter! Keep it up!
pastelroses chapter 2 . 3/30/2010
Oh wow I really like this! I like how she didn't jump over the cliff! I can't wait to see what happens next! :)
Miude chapter 2 . 3/28/2010
This was sad.. But I liked it!
Laladots14 chapter 2 . 3/27/2010
o this is getting good now! lol cant wait to read more
Miude chapter 1 . 2/21/2010
This is a good start.. I'm deinately reading this too :)
LivingLikeLarry chapter 1 . 2/11/2010
You have a very good story going even though itonly has one chapter.! I love it! please write more and check out my story Fallen Angels