Reviews for How Alice Became a Vampire
bradley chapter 1 . 6/5/2014
Hi Everyone,This was how me and my BF become VAMPIRES i got a guy from the internet called Mr Marc who was a VAMPIRE so i told him that me and my boyfriend would love to become VAMPIRES so he asked me of my Name ,Country, Age ,State , address and asked me to pay the sum of $250 to send me his blood which i did immediately and in the next 3 days i got the blood sample through the DHL which me and my boyfriend took in the blood into your body and in the next 30 minutes i turned into a VAMPIRE so if you interested in becoming a VAMPIRE kindly contact his email address today ()he also has a friend who is a warewolf just incase you want to be one okay...
Clairelou2205 chapter 6 . 2/27/2014
Hi I thought this was a great story I haven't had time to look at your others yet but I hope there is one that carries on from this one. Thank you for making a evenings reading worth while please continue the good work will gladly be adding you to my favourite author list thanks Claire (uk)
Guest chapter 6 . 12/29/2013
Her vision about Jasper is beautiful! Really love it! And her battle to understand what wss happening and how to act was very good... I think Alice was the first one to prove that the newborn theory was wrong... She had the chance and would be justified because she was alone and even didnt know what she was but she chose not to be a killer, just like Bella did in BD proving they werent monsters in their essences, would be if they chose to just like humans because in the end we also kill to survive, we just dont drink the blood, well, not the sane ones... Lol ;-) no more Alice? I would love to read more about it...
Karolsp chapter 6 . 12/29/2013
Her vision about Jasper was beautiful! I really love it! Her struggles as a newborn and how clueless she was about what she became was spot on too! So after ready this I think Alice was the first one to prove that the newborn's theory was wrong as Bella did in BD because she had the chance to do what she wanted but she chose not to so vampires arent monsters in their essences but could be if they chose to, just like humans because in the end we also kill to survive, we just not drink the blood of our pray, well, not the sane ones... Lol ;-)
No more Alice? I would love to read more about their first encounter, how Jasper reacted to her...
Karolsp chapter 5 . 12/29/2013
I had the same thought when James mentioned Alice's maker... James was much less than he thought about himself... Lol but idk if he would take the time to hide the evidences of his hunt... For me, he didnt seem to be a person who is concerned about consequences.. Sad ending for Thomas but I guess he saw this coming and was ok with it... And last but not least, congrats for your little one! Already a writer! Lol :)
Karolsp chapter 4 . 12/22/2013
The end of the chapter made me wish that Alice would have some kind of memory of him, how he loved and protected her... Feels like his choice of give his life to save her wasnt take in consideration... I know she was numb and lost inside of her but at least some kind of gratitude... Idk, I like him! Lol
Karolsp chapter 3 . 12/22/2013
Thomas sometimes sounds almost gullible but his love for Alice is soo cute! James' past was a good one, never thought about but totally possible!
Karolsp chapter 2 . 12/21/2013
Alice's maker seems sooo sweet... Im really enjoying read in his POV... Great story and as always catchy writing...
Karolsp chapter 1 . 12/21/2013
So heartbreaking... I may or may not sob more than once... I never took time to think about her past and now I realize how dark and painful was... Her maker kinda reminds me Edward when he was living like a normal vampire...
Guest chapter 6 . 5/20/2013
Beautiful
Guest chapter 6 . 5/4/2013
Alice became vampire unnone
Erin chapter 1 . 5/4/2013
she was thought to be crazey but she could see into the futore before she was a vampire the she got bit by a vampire then she saw meting Jasper in the futer and she did.
Candy01327 chapter 6 . 2/9/2013
Wow! I lovee this story soo much! Your an amazing author! Please write more? Pwetty Pwease? Pwetty pwease with a cherry on top? Pweeeaaassee? Lol!xx
adrenelinedangerheart chapter 6 . 9/20/2011
Omg its soo good i know you havent updated for over a year but i really wanna know what happens PLEASE!
JulesColes3 chapter 6 . 8/7/2011
Can't wait until your next post please post soon
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