|Reviews for Good Evening, Miss Hale|
| nofcksgiven chapter 1 . 10/26/2013
Awwwhh, Emmett is such a gentleman. I'm glad he and Rosalie are still close friends even when things didnt work out, but oh, how I wish they did!
| sarahlouise80 chapter 1 . 5/19/2012
fab story so romantic
| usagiharuka chapter 1 . 5/18/2012
sexy,beautiful, and romantic. An amazing story:) please keep up the good work!
| Amber1983 chapter 1 . 11/16/2010
I love this. So sweet and romantic and also pretty hot! Emmett is so cute. A x
| Hev99 chapter 1 . 5/30/2010
Aww I love it! You weren't kidding that it's different from the Volturi fics huh!
I loved the dual POVs that didn't repeat but moved forward. And gentleman Emmett made me sigh so hard! They do not make real men like that do they!
Just awesome, I loved it and I'm not usually a big fan of fluff so that's high praise! Great job. I will have to read the others at some point soon cos I really enjoyed that!
| rameau chapter 1 . 2/26/2010
"Once she was comfortable next to me, I propped myself up on my elbow and gazed down at her. *above her on elbow*."
This last part confuses me. Is it extra or is it supposed to be part of the previous sentence? It's own?
Other than that minor crinkle, simply entrancing. It's something about those AH period pieces that just makes me melt. The simplicity and the waiting and slow burn build up to something special under a soft light... I'll stop now.
| lalalove-Rae chapter 1 . 2/15/2010
Aw, they are just too cute together! As always, I love the research y'all put into making your fics. It's for real some of the best historical pieces I've read:)
| harley328 chapter 1 . 2/14/2010
Holy hell. He is SUCH a gentleman. I can't even comprehend his teddy-bear kindness. Guys like this hardly exist IRL. Truefax, and you know it :(
I'm also glad you ended it where you did. First I thought, "THAT'S COCKBLOCKING!" but hey, this is like an outtake. I'm happy to know they shared that moment in the past. It was beautiful :)
One of the best E/R stories I've read in a long time. Nice job, ladies!
| Jessica0306 chapter 1 . 2/14/2010
First of all, my grandma smoked Pall Malls like it was her job!
This was so sweet. Is it bad I kinda wished they had stayed together? Although, PrivateDickward is hot, too.
It's neat to see how different Rose was when she was younger. She was still learning all these things about life. I also love how her dad had no problems with her dating Emmett b/c it's the person that counts.
| eden's garden chapter 1 . 2/13/2010
i ADORE Emmett!
his made of AMAZING!
and i loved this story, it was perfect! i did always wonder about their relationship!
wow, just awesome!
| emmettroselover chapter 1 . 2/13/2010
I love Rosalie and Emmett fics especially when they are done right. I hate the shallow Rosalie and stupid Emmett stories, but when I find a really good one, one like this, it always goes into my favorites. I will say this though...how dare you leave me wanting more and end it there! You know what you were doing when you stopped right there. Could I trouble you for an epilogue lol. Great work and I loved it. Please write more Rosalie and Emmett fics. They warm my heart! I have only written one and it is called Our Wedding. It is about vamp Rose and Em after Breaking Dawn but also deals with the beginning of their relationship. Check it out if you ever get bored lol. Yet again awesome job!
| TheHeartOfLife chapter 1 . 2/12/2010
YOU'RE THE HEARTS OF MY LIFE.
Um. Sorry. I got excited.
Okay, so, how to properly summarize how much I love and adore this little slice of Em/Ro pre-Roseward? Can I start by saying I love it? You both captured their courtship (I love that word) so well - the anticipation, the slow build, the flirting. Emmett is so sweet and kind and adorable in this, but in a really sexy way if that makes sense? HELLO, if he was hanging outside my house participating in a one-man wet t-shirt contest, I'd be all over that, too. Seriously, that was a very delicious visual.
And I said this to you both via gchat/doc, but I love that you ended it where you did. Their relationship, while definitely sexy, was pretty innocent and sweet. It was nice to know that they had that moment with one another - well, hopefully more than a moment ifyouknowwhatimean - without having the play-by-play.
But I do enjoy the play-by-play with Dickward. Just so you know.
Anyway, loved this, love you guys. You did Emmett (and me) very proud.
| hmonster4 chapter 1 . 2/12/2010
Okay - brownie pt #1 - H has a hair fetish..."My fingers itched to touch the soft curls and I often wrapped my own strands of hair around them, twirling it in an attempt to placate them." M yes please :)
He'd walk past me perched on the swing, each night. And each night, without fail, he spoke those words which would carry me through until the next.
"Good evening, Miss Hale." - total flashes of princess bride here...the Em equivalent of as you wish :)
Ohh - brownie pt two - Shoulders "The water that had dripped off the ice drew zigzag patterns over his shirt and I could see the muscles of his broad shoulders ripple below the fabric" m - yes please more thank you.
"What do you think, Rosalie? Shall we give him a go?"
We shall indeed.
- gripe - that should be Heather, not Rosalie - please fix.
oh - another good evening, miss hale. Hello chauffeur boy - fetch me that pitcher of water?
For the record...Give me, a kiss to build a dream on, and my imagination, will drown a foolish heart...yeah, from memory, love that stuff :)
OMG he kissed her nose. Falling over dead now TYVM.
" . When I'd suggested it to her, I was delighted when her face lit up like a kid at Christmas . That was one of the things I really enjoyed about her, she was always up for a challenge and never backed away from trying something new." thank you so much for this little bit - so many people see it as a negative trait - but this is so quintessential Rose.
OMFG - pool porn - L you little skeeve...now the tweets make sense. I totally snarfed. Intellectual sex on green felt fully clothed...
"Aren't little boys born knowing that? Seems as if it would be intrinsic to your very make-up to me," she teased sarcastically. Um...nothing about Em is little - except his theoretical age - which would be small, not little. Just saying...
Ah - redemption in my hair teasing...le epic sigh, dark curls FTW
Aww - and she is the confident one and he is the sweet one...how damn cute is that. Now just control f thru this - make it Heather, auburn hair and green eyes, and we are golden :)
Thanks babes - this was fabulous!
| Ginaaaa chapter 1 . 2/12/2010
I really loved this, it was adorable.
| susayq chapter 1 . 2/12/2010
I think this is one of the best Rose/Emmett stories I've read in a long while :)