Reviews for One Mistake
Sa-Ga-Ne chapter 1 . 12/2
I really love this. Usually I'm off somewhere fangirling over SasuGaa, but I'm giving NaruGaa a try. Did not disappoint. Please finish this, I will keep coming back for more.
Saika chapter 21 . 12/1
Please continue! OMG! I love this fic! Can Gaara be able to give birth to do the baby?
Crimson flower chapter 4 . 11/8
U mean to tell me that my Gaara is...
Crimson flower chapter 2 . 11/8
U don't have to be so rough naruto. Remember that Gaara is younger, smaller, weaker and frailer than you. Still love it though. Gaara got it hard. The 5th kazekaga of the sand getting...raped by his best friend...
Gaara chapter 21 . 9/12
ini gk bakal dilanjut min?
Kenapa min? kenapa?
Aku suka cerita ini, walaupun inggrisku masih berantakan, tapi aku suka dan paham ceritanya...
Lanjutin kek min...
udah mau ending kan ini?
jangan gantungin readers mon, please...
HOTxGOTHxGHOSTxGIRL chapter 21 . 9/11
omg noooooo continue please I'm so into it I can't stop reading
Guest chapter 21 . 6/28
Finish the story it can't end with out a happy ending
PurpleOmpski chapter 21 . 5/29
Would love to read more.
ashleynawoor4 chapter 8 . 5/2
hey, I like this type of story, and I was wondering if you would like to continue writing beyond the 21 chapter. I know that I took a lot of time before I sent you my review but it was only recently that I got myself interested in fan fiction so I hope you forgive me. and also can I expect to get the new chapter in the following days, well you said that you would continue writing for even one person so...
himahime chapter 19 . 1/22
Dark-Senpaii please lanjutin ff nyaaa, ceritanya kerennn, sedih sii tapi kerennn, jadii lanjutiin yaa senpai, klo bsa happy ending kyk it's isn't a common merriage, trus lanjutin ff ryukii jga yaa, aku sukaa sama semua ff dark-senpai kerennn, jadii dark senpai tolong jng lupakan kami para reader mu yanv senantiasa menungu karya2 terbaikmu. Ganbate senpai :D
himahime chapter 18 . 1/21
Dark-Senpaii, please lanjutiin fanfic ini, ini keren bangeet, sedih sii tapi kereenn, Semoga bisa happy ending kaya it's isn't a common merriage, dan semoga senpai jga mau lanjjutin fanfic ryukii, aku seneng bangeet baca ff Senpai semuanya kereennn lanjut yaa senpaii Ganbateee :D
HerBrokenSmile chapter 21 . 1/11
Please don't tell me you've abandoned this story. I need to read more! This is really good! You can't just leave it on a cliff hanger. Well, you can but that's just cruel. I really hope you continue this.
oka chapter 21 . 1/5
ewwwww kak kpn update?
Udh lama bgggt niii. please update dungg.
Aku sampe baca ulang nii Dr awal..
please please please please update...

thank you..
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I-Love-Trunks1 chapter 21 . 11/4/2015
That was so sad. I hope this story has a happy ending for both Naruto and Gaara. I hope they'll both be ok, and that their unborn child will be ok as well. Could you please have Gaara carry twins inside him? a boy and girl? I hope Sai and Sakura will both be ok ass well. I hope you keep writing this story, I love it! even though it's sad.
Dude.cx chapter 21 . 10/20/2015
Omg lol I think it would've been a better ending where gaara died in that one chapter . Lol it was like a karma is a bitch for naruto. U know Destiny and shit
X3 awesome story tho
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