Reviews for One Mistake
himahime chapter 19 . 1/22
Dark-Senpaii please lanjutin ff nyaaa, ceritanya kerennn, sedih sii tapi kerennn, jadii lanjutiin yaa senpai, klo bsa happy ending kyk it's isn't a common merriage, trus lanjutin ff ryukii jga yaa, aku sukaa sama semua ff dark-senpai kerennn, jadii dark senpai tolong jng lupakan kami para reader mu yanv senantiasa menungu karya2 terbaikmu. Ganbate senpai :D
himahime chapter 18 . 1/21
Dark-Senpaii, please lanjutiin fanfic ini, ini keren bangeet, sedih sii tapi kereenn, Semoga bisa happy ending kaya it's isn't a common merriage, dan semoga senpai jga mau lanjjutin fanfic ryukii, aku seneng bangeet baca ff Senpai semuanya kereennn lanjut yaa senpaii Ganbateee :D
HerBrokenSmile chapter 21 . 1/11
Please don't tell me you've abandoned this story. I need to read more! This is really good! You can't just leave it on a cliff hanger. Well, you can but that's just cruel. I really hope you continue this.
oka chapter 21 . 1/5
ewwwww kak kpn update?
Udh lama bgggt niii. please update dungg.
Aku sampe baca ulang nii Dr awal..
please please please please update...

thank you..
I-Love-Trunks1 chapter 21 . 11/4/2015
That was so sad. I hope this story has a happy ending for both Naruto and Gaara. I hope they'll both be ok, and that their unborn child will be ok as well. Could you please have Gaara carry twins inside him? a boy and girl? I hope Sai and Sakura will both be ok ass well. I hope you keep writing this story, I love it! even though it's sad. chapter 21 . 10/20/2015
Omg lol I think it would've been a better ending where gaara died in that one chapter . Lol it was like a karma is a bitch for naruto. U know Destiny and shit
X3 awesome story tho chapter 11 . 10/19/2015
Lmaol him thinking of taking advantage of a sleeping gaara xD omg
narliesa chapter 21 . 9/14/2015
aku hanya ingin Naruto Gaara kembali, bahagia , bersama .. ah .. hiks ... Mungkinkah author bersedia ?
chocolatemonsters chapter 21 . 8/27/2015
The storyline of the story is, by far, the only reason why I keep reading this until this chapter. To be honest, this story is written poorly in English. And I am not really sure about this, but something about your writing-style is a little bit odd and it becomes quite a turn-off for me. And no, I am not 'terrorizing' you. I'd be glad if you take this review simply as a constructive criticism rather than something bashful. And I suggest you, if you want to keep writing stories in English, you should read more fanfictions (which is written in a really good English, of course!) and books. I can suggest some authors here who write really nice stories, if you'd like me to. Aaaaaaand, I love the Indonesian version more than the English one! (Yes, I am Indonesian, sweetie!) #sorrynotsorry

I hope my review would help you to become better and better in each chapter. I am not a good English user too because English is surely not my mother-tongue, but hey we're all still learning here to be better. So, let's be friends and I REALLY AM LOOKING FORWARD TO YOUR NEXT UPDATE LIKE WTF DON'T YOU HAVE A HEART LEAVING YOUR READERS HANGING LIKE THIS? AND PLEASE GIVE OUR GAARA-CHAN AND NARUTO-KUN SOME FLUFFY MOMENTS FOR THE NEXT FEW CHAPTERS AFTER WHAT THEY HAVE BEEN THROUGH, NE?! Lol okay bye, baby! ;)
Guest chapter 9 . 8/24/2015
Please do not change the story. It's as good as it's now. Pls just finish it. We need it like that for once. Oki?
The Quiet Onez chapter 21 . 8/23/2015
Damn it! How can u do that! We r all curious of what happens next and u haven't updated in about a year! How can u be so cold! Do we not matter D':
How could u!
rahma412 chapter 21 . 8/23/2015
Thanks for the amazing story! i hope you can keep writing :)
The Quiet Onez chapter 16 . 8/16/2015
Love the story and isn't finished yet though but i thought i might tell u its "Ohayou" not "Ohayo" i study japanese. Its nothing big i know but i couldnt help myself from saying its a habit..
jennifer lane chapter 21 . 8/11/2015
When are you going to put the next next one on here
ChibiAstral chapter 10 . 5/30/2015
Dude! X3 This is so cute! I love it so much!
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