|Reviews for Guitar girl : Da ja vu|
| xXNeverEndingFireXx chapter 4 . 11/30/2011
Oh em gee!Can you please update this is great stuff 3 guitar girl molly&dean 4ever!
| vividreamz chapter 4 . 6/21/2010
ummm... sorry, but who is dylan, do u mean dean. im sorry i just didn't get it. sorry
| vampgirl234 chapter 1 . 5/4/2010
Hi guys thanx for the reviews im working up the next chapter its just im busy with school and homework should be out soon maybe this week keep reviewing and know i do have ur comments in mind but it does get annoying when like 10 ppl tel;l me the same thing over and over again. im trying to create something new by putting slang into books the speech will contain slang but if u dont like how i write just say my ears are open and hopefully i wont get mad as i have a short temper! luving u all :P
| RainboLuck chapter 2 . 5/2/2010
This could potentially be a really good story, but you have to work on some things.
1) Grammer and punctuation. It seems like you're writing a conversation on MSN instead of a story.
2) Spelling. It helps if you write on Word or something that has spellcheck.
You'd be surprised how much better your stories will be with just some cleaning up.
| Ayane Rose chapter 4 . 4/16/2010
this is so good, i always wanted to know what might happen if molly met dean again. it would be great if you would continue with this story. :)
| studentofhufflepuff chapter 1 . 3/30/2010
i like it:)
dean was so mean in how he treated her in the book lol
but i like this:)
| isabelisdoingwell chapter 4 . 3/25/2010
i vote you update soon :)
though try to watch your grammar/spelling?
the story's fab though- pls update soon!
| crazypanda815 chapter 4 . 3/22/2010
BTW:HIS NAME IS DEAN NOT DYLAN!BUT I LIKE UR MORE ATTENTION ON UR GRAMMAR AND NAMES!
| Vampgirl234 chapter 4 . 3/17/2010
soz bout that told u i forgott got mixed up with diary of a crush
| iclemyerlover chapter 4 . 3/15/2010
Haha Oh Lordy! Nice chappie darling!
BTWhis name is Dean not Dylan
| lIttlE.mi55.psYco chapter 4 . 3/15/2010
| Vampgirl234 chapter 1 . 3/14/2010
sorry i havent updated but ive been reading lets ge lost its like the second book it features molly and jane you should all read it it's realy good atleast by tomorrow ill have another chapter as ur all asking and i hope you keep reading
| lIttlE.mi55.psYco chapter 3 . 3/13/2010
| iclemyerlover chapter 3 . 3/7/2010
OMG PLEASEPLEASEPLEASE UPDATE!
| LoveMeLots chapter 3 . 3/5/2010
yeah the story's !but when will you come up with the next chapter?:)love it!good work!