it makes ZERO sense that edward is becoming immune to jaspers power. i get it though. youre trying to make his pansy ass an actual challenge to jasper.

edward is controlling either way. before and after. if this edwarddoes it for you" i would seek therapy.

Just letting you know that this is my favorite Twilight story of all time. I read it every year. I would be devastated if you ever deleted it. Is this on AO3? If not, might I suggest posting it there? There is a whole other world of readers who would surely appreciate your work.

sooooo do i get more or is this it. i definitely need another book of them

not me google image search 100 monkeys. lmao

loving this and the AU of it. can't wait to read more

I've read this story multiple times and still love it. It keeps you on edge wondering what Edward is up to and how far he would go, wondering when he'll return and if Jasper and Bella can survive whatever happens I love it

Loved this story! ..

Thank you for sharing Xx

I like to think that back in 2010 I read this but never bookmarked it, but back then I was shocked at the thought of Bella being with anyone else. Now I only read stories where she isn't with Edward. What a freaking ride! Thanks so much for such an awesome story!

So glad you didn't go the route of him believing her. It still sucks lol

It's only the fact that there will be a HEA that I'm able to get through this! Lol

so Eddie is now an abusive boyfriend? do as I say or no sex for you? what a prick!

Edward is being an over reactive, jealous dick!

was this a dream?

I read this story in a day, it was amazing and I was so invested. I'm pleased it had a happy ending but often the suspense was killing me. Thank you for writing such a great story.