Reviews for Innocence Lost
jk chapter 20 . 3/30
jasper said a few chapters ago that he had never been with a human and now hes saying something different...that's just bullshit
jk chapter 14 . 3/30
you make it out like the man and vampire are 2 different people fighting for the body and I actually hate that
cant it just be that Edwards a douche don't want Edward to have a happy ending in this story..he fucked up big time he doesn deserve shit...have him miserable for eternity or kill him off
jk chapter 12 . 3/30
that was a weak attempt of you to keep Victoria in the story...jasper had her he could of killed her and came back to dispose of the body or have someone else do it he does have a phone
jk chapter 10 . 3/30
it Is soooo fucking wrong that no one is telling bella Edwards cheating on her...and he cheated on her and went right to bella and jasper fucking knew cause he was standing outside the window...ifi was bella id want to know and right the fuck now too.
their not her friends if their not telling her
jk chapter 6 . 3/30
Edwards fuckig cheating on her huh? ohhh I really hope not
jk chapter 3 . 3/30
it seems that bella was looking for reasons to be worried ya know..i thought Edward was being sexy and playful...I mean what the fuck did she think would happen awakening a sexual side in Edward? the boy has over 100 years of pent up sexual frustration. he should just change her now so her body can take it...problem solved
Reinonmyday chapter 42 . 3/8
I think you did a great job on this! I really liked darkward, and how everything came together.
B4bidden.Products chapter 42 . 1/2
Loved this story alot thank you for showing a dark side of Edward.. I've always thought jnb belong together
Apailana chapter 42 . 1/2
Hi! I've finished reading your story. It's awesome, I really liked it. It was so lovely and with a lot of angst.
I liked that Alice wasn't a bitch like in other fics, and that she enjoyed a new life with Philiph.

I'm only sad because I would like Jas and Bells having a baby. But no matter, Im going to read your other works and of coursw your trilogy.

Thanks for wrote. TEAM JASPER!
Calyptra chapter 41 . 12/17/2014
That was a nice story. Your idea about Edward was good and you developed it nicely. I am curious though. I can understand him going dark after giving in to his desires, but what about the extra strength and the gift immunity? I liked it, but how did it work?
Jasper was an awesome character, but then again it it is difficult to ruin that one. I liked his story with Bella.

The whole fanfic was beautifully written.
Calyptra chapter 2 . 12/15/2014
Finally an interesting Edward. I don't care how dark and selfish he gets. The original version was a little boring.
M.S.Carol chapter 35 . 9/25/2014
man...for some reason Edward makes a big point.
M.S.Carol chapter 33 . 9/25/2014
I almost fell bad for this Edward...he desperately wants her and yet...he's just evil but evil can't want love too...even though this is not it.
MSCAROL chapter 2 . 9/20/2014
Holy Monkeys...what exactly shifted in that brain of his i wonder.
M.S.Carol chapter 10 . 9/20/2014
I love your A/N it has your wit. I'm enjoying this. I can't believe I waited this long to read it.
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