Reviews for Alternate Dimension: Special Events
JakeRoss2 chapter 1 . 4/8/2010
omg...

that was...

AMAZING!

WOW. I didn't expect that...

the use of poetry within the story was touching, I didn't expect that amount of loving emotions to be poured out so simply.

JakeRoss2
my username is ghostboy 315 chapter 1 . 3/16/2010
pretty good, but not rlly edited. If you make more i would love 2 edit them. also u used hapieness too many times. )
Onej6 chapter 1 . 2/13/2010
very good beginning of the story

youre on my story/autor alert listt now

Nakta Plynir
anon chapter 1 . 2/12/2010
That was awesome

I loved Jake gave Rose a bikini and they went swimming and also fancy dinner and dressed up

Maybe next we see the honeymoon Jake carry Rose bridal style or over his shoulder him in his lap and playfully pat, grab, slap her rear

Jake and Rose forever
Luiz4200 chapter 1 . 2/12/2010
Good one. Was that before or after they met their cartoon counterparts?