Reviews for Biting in the Hallway
mendesana chapter 1 . 10/7/2013
hot
Smayz chapter 1 . 6/29/2011
Wow, that was hot. Best line ever "I want you too, so get your butt inside the church and up into your room so I can fuck you."
K'sChoiceofAFI chapter 1 . 2/13/2010
I don't know how to describe this other than saying it was really, really, really, really...hot!

You have to write more like this in the future.
Rae Tamwood chapter 1 . 2/13/2010
Gah. You broke me. In a very good way *sigh*

I'm loving your writing so much :)
VogueThousand chapter 1 . 2/13/2010
Awesome job !
Roarax chapter 1 . 2/12/2010
"Rachel pulled the vampire's head up by tugging on her hair and looked her in the eye, 'I want you too, so get your butt inside the church and up into your room so I can fuck you.' "

Best. Line. Ever. I absolutely adore the way each of the women knows exactly what the other is thinking; how their convorsations are basicaqlly constituted of repeating or acknowledging the other's statement as their own. It's so freaking cute.

THIS, you have to continue. If not, then I wish to have more scenes like this in the future. Thank-you :)