|Reviews for His trouble, her trouble|
| JacobPhantom chapter 6 . 6/18/2017
Please update your story!
| Guest chapter 6 . 12/13/2012
this story is amazing
| GreenEyesofMischief chapter 6 . 12/24/2010
Umm that was an interesting story. Maybe the next steps to making the whole thing better would be to watch your run-on sentences and maybe watch the flow of time period. I find it skips important details like how Conrad (" ") would actually handle something like Todd saying he was in love with his sister. Other than that, keep writing more chapters because I want to find out what happens next! ;)
| GreenEyesofMischief chapter 1 . 12/24/2010
Umm... Strange topic but I think it was a good quality. If you could write more than I would like to continue reading! ;)
| Killjoy slash Whovian chapter 4 . 6/9/2010
this is good! :D
make more pls!
| Porsche101 chapter 3 . 3/13/2010
I really liked this chapter, too. I think Todd was really sweet and I think I would do the same thing if I found out my brother wasn't really related to me (I don't have an older brother, so that can never happen... plus I'm a girl). But I have one question... what did the envelope say on it that made Riley tell Todd the truth?
| Porsche101 chapter 2 . 3/13/2010
Oh, this is so creative! It has a great storyline :)
I like how it is so far, although your English and detail could be tweaked a little bit. Other than that, it's good.