|Reviews for Never Tickle A Sleeping Dragon|
| Eldritch.screech chapter 1 . 9/26/2019
Reading your stories is like liquid happiness - they're compact but never superficial or too unrealistically fast paced, the emotions simply ring true!
| spotterhead13 chapter 1 . 10/25/2018
love your story! i loved how it started out slow with Hermione being a girl then transforming into a woman, it makes the story a bit more realistic for me as you can see instances where Charlie and Hermione could have connected.
| The Carmine Wanker chapter 1 . 2/9/2018
The way you develop her feelings and their relationship by way of jumping between short moments is incredible. I'm in a sort of similar situation and such moments stick out in my memory, so the way you portray that is impeccable and realistic. Bravo.
| killer4853 chapter 1 . 9/13/2014
| Thy Great Pretender chapter 1 . 12/25/2011
I'm not as good with words as I would like to be but I've spent the night reading your stories and wanted to say some things about why I like them.
I wanted to say I quite like this story. I like how she goes from a little girl to a woman, it was very sweet and I enjoyed the recurring theme. The part about her hands and how it all linked up with the sleeping dragons and Charlie's tattoo.
I also want to say that there is one element to your writing that is an absolute breath of fresh air for me and that is your take on virgin Hermione. I cannot tell you how sick to death I am of fanfiction that describes Hermione (who sometimes has never even held hands with a man before) suddenly turn into a raging whore the second she gets her clothes off. Virgins should be a little bit shy and it should hurt, a little bit at least, other wise it just seems so false to me. No one I have ever met who was willing to talk about it ever said that their first time was like something out of a porn film but that seems to be the way it is most often written.
So I want to thank you for the beautiful way you wrote Charlie and Hermione, I like the way you describe how he smells. So few words yet so much detail.
Your characterisation of the characters is how I myself see them. I like your sweet, gentle Charlie.
I had only just started reading Charlie/Hermione when I stumbled on your page as I was finding myself bored with Ron. I never did like him in the books, I like him in the films but I can't stand him in the books. Hermione is so intelligent and Ron... just isn't. I can understand them being nice friends but I always felt he was not on Hermione's intellectual level and she deserved better, she should have gotten Harry maybe. So I was thrilled when I started finding Charlie/Bill/Twins stories, they are far more interesting than Ron in my opinion. So far I prefer Charlie as he is the most exciting! He works with dragons for a living, how much more exciting could you get. It stands to reason that he is quite intelligent too, working in Romania and researching.
I like your Draco/Hermione stories too. That has been an interesting pairing for me for a few years now but I have always found it quite difficult to find any of reasonable quality. I do like yours. Mostly because they are not ridiculously out of character and your writing has a good structure that is easy for me to read and understand.
I can see how your writing has improved over the years. The style in your early works is quite different from what you write now and I think that is a good thing. Very obvious improvements in story flow and grammar.
Well I'm afraid to say my brain is a frighteningly disorganised, confusing place to be so that's all I can think to say for now. I hope you got something positive out of this review. Continue to enjoy reading and writing.
| Jaelle91 chapter 1 . 6/23/2011
Amazing. I think this is the most beautiful, calm and flowing story I have ever read. Not very much action but a beautiful sweet story. Loved it.
| miriCurran chapter 1 . 2/20/2011
OMG! love the story
| Mischief's Mistress chapter 1 . 2/13/2011
Great o/s. Glad Hermione got her HEA
| Jay.Marisa chapter 1 . 6/27/2010
So cute! I loved your Charlie.
| Fizz Frenchtoast chapter 1 . 3/13/2010
sweet, and probably the best hermione/charlie fic i've read so far. very nice _
| KatsOnTheAirplane chapter 1 . 2/28/2010
love the whole "Never tickle a sleeping Dragon' thing
| IGOTEAMEDWARD chapter 1 . 2/13/2010
Thanks! It was cute! :)
| Brass Camera chapter 1 . 2/13/2010
Great oneshot! I like how you chose the moments and pulled the theme through. Cheers!
| GrandeVanillaSkimLatte chapter 1 . 2/13/2010
:) Very sweet.
| Eva1983 chapter 1 . 2/12/2010
That was sweet! I loved it.