|Reviews for Fires Within|
| Sycocat2 chapter 1 . 11/8/2013
I enjoyed reading this so much! There were a few spelling errors and a bit of jumbly parts, but for the most part this is a fantastic story! So sweet and in character, way better than my attempt at this topic.
| Burst-Into-Flames chapter 1 . 1/29/2011
| mimi chapter 1 . 6/28/2010
im so excited to see what happends
| littleghosttoast chapter 1 . 4/1/2010
This is my first review so dont expect much...
I thought this was a realy good story, it was cute but not to cute and there wasn't really any OOCness with Eclipse (i've noticed that happens alot).
You can really tell that Eclipse is confused and he's not to sure what he is doing. It actually made me say 'aw cute'. All in all i thought it was good and definatly worth reading :)
Like i said, twas my first review thats why it's so short.
| bluebliss86 chapter 1 . 2/27/2010
:o its a cliffhanger! (to me anyway) please write more!
| Avensei chapter 1 . 2/14/2010
NO ECLIPSE! DON'T LEAVE!
*cough* I mean, uh...great story. Update quickly!