Reviews for Breaking dawn: The Jacob and Bella alternate tale
MissPutnam123 chapter 3 . 4/29/2011
Wow! How do I even begin to tell you how amazing that story was! I was completly drawn in to it and I didn't want it to end! I have read all of the twilight books and I always wanted Bella to choose Jacob and when I read this, It was almost like I was reading breaking dawn but ending the way I wanted it to end in the actual book, thats how increadible it was!

The descriptions and use of vocabulary were great and it made the story a pleasure to read! I hope to read more of you stories soon!
jacob black rulez chapter 3 . 2/15/2010
oo whats going to happen great!
jacob black rulez chapter 2 . 2/15/2010
great chapter
jacob black rulez chapter 1 . 2/15/2010
oo that was close
goldengirl62 chapter 3 . 2/15/2010
this sounds good:)