|Reviews for Boy Crazy|
| Kylie Robbins chapter 1 . 5/26/2010
How sweet :]
Although...I've never thought of Lassie and Shawn as a couple...
(Which is a little odd considering my favorite pairings seem to basically have the same dynamic...)
| invisalite chapter 1 . 2/20/2010
I'm happy that you did a Shassie pairing for your candy hearts! They were both really good.
I have only one suggestion for you.
Because he knew Shawn, and he knew the man would only be crazy for him now, and that was enough for now.
-You use "now" twice in one sentence, and it sounds rather repetitive... try to find another way to say what you want the reader to see.
Great story! Thanks for writing it. :)