Reviews for One little kiss
I-Love-Trunks1 chapter 1 . 9/2/2014
I thought it was really sad when Daisuke left. Poor Ken. I'm glad Daisuke came back in the end, and I'm really glad this story had a happy ending.

I loved this story so much!
Shabby Unicorn chapter 1 . 8/6/2012
YAY Happy :) Good fic ;)
NamelessNow chapter 1 . 11/8/2010
Pressing enter after every sentence doesn't make a poem.

Even one without rhymes (so called blank verse) has to have a regular meter.

There are couple of rhymes throughout this piece, but that makes it even worse - either rhyme everything or don't rhyme at all.

Writing poetry isn't for everyone, maybe stick to prose?
Pheonix09 chapter 1 . 6/13/2010
nice job
Mantinas chapter 1 . 4/2/2010
Great story.
youcantcatchmeimdead chapter 1 . 4/2/2010
:D :D :D :D :D THAT WAS SO CUTE! I started to cry when Daisuke left, the story was that touching! Your writing is like poetry, only better. Please, please, keep doing daiken stuff to feed my (and other's) hungry yaoi souls.
Scraggles chapter 1 . 3/21/2010
Well, since you gave me a review, I'll return the favor.

I'm not the best at reading poetry, since English isn't my first language, but this was cute. Your writing style is confusing to me, but I like it anyway. Good job )