Reviews for A Trail a Mile Wide
aadarshinah chapter 1 . 3/17/2010
omg... rotfl...

mordin... riot... red light district...

this is just too funny.
Caeruleya chapter 1 . 3/11/2010
I LOL'd the WHOLE time. The ending with Shep's omni-tool was priceless.
UECreed007 chapter 1 . 3/7/2010
One word: Win. Awesome and funny story!
Angurvddel chapter 1 . 3/2/2010
Nice, very nice, loved how you took the the mass effect characters and matched them to the lyrics of the song. I'm a little surprised you didn't equate Dr. Chakwas to the head nurse though. Now _that_ would have made Shepard's jaw drop. And I suppose the importing plants that seduce the mayor's wife would have been a bit too out there.

Again, absolutely brilliant.
MitisVenatrix chapter 1 . 2/27/2010
OMFG... my sides and cheeks hurt from laughing... THIS WAS AWESOME. No, wait, I have to go read it again...
WhitethornWolf chapter 1 . 2/26/2010
I lol'd.
BucklesintheSun chapter 1 . 2/20/2010
This had me laughing from start to finish. Loved it. Very in-character as well.
Mighty Crouton chapter 1 . 2/20/2010
This was fabulous. I'm not sure if this was a Renegade shepard fic, but it certainly tasted like one and its always nice to find them floating around when they are about.

Great story. Loved Legion's side bit.
Sayle chapter 1 . 2/18/2010
The wonderful thing about this isn't just that it's funny - it's that it is actually quite true to the characters.

Mordin WOULD do something like that. Grunt would definitely try to kill somebody if there was a bounty on them and a fight was in the bargain...Kelly herself says she is OMNIsexual, so while the event is disturbing it isn't out of character...

But Legion...that surprised me.
Zepheera chapter 1 . 2/14/2010
I couldn't read this for more than a few lines at a time without having to stop to wait for the giggles to subside. Fantastic!
ArmoredSoul chapter 1 . 2/14/2010
I laughed.

So hard.

Christ, my FACE hurts from laughing.

And my mom is looking at me funny...


Thessili chapter 1 . 2/14/2010
Jack meditating & Thane groped? haha bloody funny - this is great :)
chasingfireflies chapter 1 . 2/14/2010
rofl. That was awesome.

Jelfia Maleak chapter 1 . 2/14/2010
oh i can not stop laughing great job.
Cat61 chapter 1 . 2/13/2010
ohmigod...can't...breathe...seriously, I was laughing so hard my stomach hurt after reading this. The lines are great, and the best part is you could almost see all of this happening. It's nice you didn't give out Shepard's first name, so anyone can imagine it being their Shep, as long as they're playing a girl at any rate , A very nice job, hope to see more from you in the future.
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