Reviews for A Trail a Mile Wide
harpandsword chapter 1 . 4/15/2010
Bahahahahahahaha...nice tip of the that to Voyage Home, btw.
Jedi Knight Revan chapter 1 . 4/5/2010
Very nice! The mental images are disturbing and yet very funny XD
aadarshinah chapter 1 . 3/17/2010
omg... rotfl...

mordin... riot... red light district...

this is just too funny.
Caeruleya chapter 1 . 3/11/2010
I LOL'd the WHOLE time. The ending with Shep's omni-tool was priceless.
UECreed007 chapter 1 . 3/7/2010
One word: Win. Awesome and funny story!
Angurvddel chapter 1 . 3/2/2010
Nice, very nice, loved how you took the the mass effect characters and matched them to the lyrics of the song. I'm a little surprised you didn't equate Dr. Chakwas to the head nurse though. Now _that_ would have made Shepard's jaw drop. And I suppose the importing plants that seduce the mayor's wife would have been a bit too out there.

Again, absolutely brilliant.
MitisVenatrix chapter 1 . 2/27/2010
OMFG... my sides and cheeks hurt from laughing... THIS WAS AWESOME. No, wait, I have to go read it again...
WhitethornWolf chapter 1 . 2/26/2010
I lol'd.
BucklesintheSun chapter 1 . 2/20/2010
This had me laughing from start to finish. Loved it. Very in-character as well.
Mighty Crouton chapter 1 . 2/20/2010
This was fabulous. I'm not sure if this was a Renegade shepard fic, but it certainly tasted like one and its always nice to find them floating around when they are about.

Great story. Loved Legion's side bit.
Sayle chapter 1 . 2/18/2010
The wonderful thing about this isn't just that it's funny - it's that it is actually quite true to the characters.

Mordin WOULD do something like that. Grunt would definitely try to kill somebody if there was a bounty on them and a fight was in the bargain...Kelly herself says she is OMNIsexual, so while the event is disturbing it isn't out of character...

But Legion...that surprised me.
Zepheera chapter 1 . 2/14/2010
I couldn't read this for more than a few lines at a time without having to stop to wait for the giggles to subside. Fantastic!
ArmoredSoul chapter 1 . 2/14/2010
I laughed.

So hard.

Christ, my FACE hurts from laughing.

And my mom is looking at me funny...

THIS IS AWESOME.

XD
Thessili chapter 1 . 2/14/2010
Jack meditating & Thane groped? haha bloody funny - this is great :)
chasingfireflies chapter 1 . 2/14/2010
rofl. That was awesome.

:)
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