Reviews for Look Before You Fall
dirtypillowtalk chapter 14 . 6/8/2010
unfortunately yes, being caught in the act is horrifying and un-fucking nessecary if you ask me.
Mo'Reading chapter 14 . 6/8/2010
How does Edward go from telling Gabe that he’s giving him a job because he’s been working hard to ‘The night you were born I cried like a baby’? That was kind of out there and although it’s normal for a girl to go from one subject to another it’s not for guys, I know because my husband tells me that all the time. He is always asking me how I went from shoes, to babies in the same sentence or something similar. Oh my gosh isn’t Lola like 14 or 15? Gabe was doing so good. I was never caught in the act but one time my cousin and I had a joint in my room and we were trying to figure out where to hide it when my mom walked in on us, he dropped it to the ground right by my foot and I shifted my weight to hover my foot over it, then my mom out of nowhere tells me she needs me to fix the blinds right behind me which meant I would have to get up and move my foot off the joint, I was so scared, I don’t know how but somehow my cousing took the joint and replaced it with a regular cigarette without my mom noticing so we still got grounded but for the wrong kind of smoke.
Bammers chapter 14 . 6/8/2010
Not me but my husband did his first time LOL loved it update when you can thanks...
3diamonds chapter 14 . 6/8/2010
Poor Lola, I guess that could have gone better. What a cockblocker Edward is! Well, Gabe shouldn't have given in that easy, he should have planned something special. But rl doesn't always work like that ;}
scrosby66 chapter 14 . 6/8/2010
Poor Gabe. Thanks for writing!
Cullenfan524 chapter 14 . 6/8/2010
Heheh I can't believe they almost got caught! That was a great chapter! :)
tinkrbell72 chapter 14 . 6/8/2010
Oh, poor Lola, her first time was not cut short. So how will Lola feel about Gabe working with Naomi? Could make her insecure, or just jealous. What will happen when the baby is born? Gabe just got to keep it in his pants,lol! can't wait till that baby is born.
bugsmama07 chapter 14 . 6/8/2010
i'm glad that edward is gonna help gabe out but god lord, he had to go ruin his luck streak and have sex with lola, which was so sweet, BTW. but, seriously, getting caught is worse.

i got caught by my sister one time. she was younger than me and heard noises coming from my room and decided to peek in. little freak. lol.
bouncy 72 chapter 14 . 6/8/2010
*sigh* oh Gabe, that was not a good idea! Please, let the condom have worked. I know he didn't come but there is still like a 3% chance...Hahaha I'm so paranoind aren't I. it's such a tiny chance AND he used a condom. Should be sweet. Gosh cancer & a pregnancy would NOT be a good thing...& can you imagine having two knocked up girls to provide for.

I'm still not sure I trust Naomi either!

Thanks for the chapter hon!
manda2784 chapter 14 . 6/8/2010
Great chapter. It's nice for Gabe that he got a better paying job now that he's proven his maturity to his dad. Hopefully getting caught with Lola won't ruin that for him.
xxxlookingformyedwardxxx chapter 14 . 6/8/2010
love it cant wait for more!
FutureMrsBCullen chapter 14 . 6/8/2010
oooh ur better off buying a new 1 those are dear to fix well in ireland anyways
cvds chapter 14 . 6/8/2010
Great chapter! Sorry about your iphone.
Kerry Hale chapter 14 . 6/8/2010
OMGthey didn't even get to finish that is just so sad. Great update.
pixiekat7 chapter 14 . 6/8/2010
One paycheck coming your way!

Fantastic chapter BB, I loved it!

I'm really glad that Gabe & Nay have regained their friendship. They've know each other & been close for far too long to throw all of it away.

As for Gabe & Lo...I just wanna slap that boy & she needs a good talkin' to. I understand Lo's feelings, but Gabe should know better honestly.

Hearts & hugs, until next time.

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