Reviews for Look Before You Fall
chmcolli chapter 18 . 8/26/2010
Great chapter! My favorite yet. It's great seeing Gabe grow up, and that no matter what happens, good or bad, he is going to love his little girl as best he can. I also like he and Evie's relationship. I'm actually ok with Lo being out of the picture- Gabe's got bigger fish to fry. And once Lo and Naomi are out of it, he can focus and point himself in a new direction.

Good luck on your boards!
Jordyn2011 chapter 17 . 8/24/2010
First of all, I love this story and I would love a teaser! Secondly, this is just so well written, do you have a beta or are you just that talented? ) Oh, and I would love to have two different point of views in the up and coming chapters, it provides more interest. )
mommakal chapter 17 . 8/23/2010
Looks like Gabe has things going great now, but I'm not ready for the bumps in the road. But very interested to see E&B POV again.
bellskindagirl chapter 17 . 8/20/2010
another excellent chapter i would like to hear from both B and E you do a good job seeing and telling the story from two different points of veiw!
dirtypillowtalk chapter 17 . 8/20/2010
Really great! What the fuck Evie? So wrong. hahah
vampiremom1221 chapter 17 . 8/19/2010
I am so glad that he is starting to show some maturity. It is good that he is working so hard so that he can make things right for his daughter,
Mo'Reading chapter 17 . 8/19/2010
Ooooh, Gabe is really gonna have to be a daddy, I like it for two reasons

1.I still think Naomi is trying to break Gave & Lola up so I wonder how she will feel about Gabe having to be a full time dad

looks like Gabe is headed towards breaking Lola’s heart which I don’t like but it happens so I would much rather have him break up with Lola because he has to be a full time dad than because he’s going to go back to Naomi.

I am however glad that Gabe asked Edward to limit his time with Naomi.

I’m glad the Gabe and Lola are spending more time together, but there are obviously issues there with him leaving for college.

Even more glad that he has set some goals and had the wake up call.

I would prefer you use both E & B POV, sometimes it’s to frustrating to read only one POV and then wait till the next update to get the other persons POV.

I want a teaser PLEEEAAAASE!
SexyBelle chapter 17 . 8/19/2010
so sweet!
Kerry Hale chapter 17 . 8/19/2010
So glad to see Gabe get his butt in gear. Glad he and Lola got some time to. awesome update.
Joycp chapter 17 . 8/19/2010
Great chapter! Gabe is really maturing!
stupidlamb2010 chapter 17 . 8/19/2010
wow this chpt was amazing. i'm getting really excited for when things pick up pace... i can't wait for more e and b you know we love them. update soon.
sonicunicorns chapter 17 . 8/19/2010
i like gabe and lola together, i hope they don't break up.
vampiregurl17 chapter 17 . 8/19/2010
Yay at least more edward bella i love gabe lol he is so lost but great chp i loved it im happy for lo and gabe hmm the p.o.v should be like gabe edwaard bella or something the 3 of em should have a pov but ur the best an u always know what to do just giving u ideas :) 3 Can i get a teaser please?
ZiggaZigAhh chapter 17 . 8/18/2010
I'm glad to see Gabe is trying to grow up by taking responsibility and setting some serious goals. I do fear however, that he is overloading himself and something will end up breaking. I truly hope it's not but, I have a feeling that the thing that will break most easily will be his and Lola's relationship.
xxxlookingformyedwardxxx chapter 17 . 8/18/2010
love it cant wait for more!
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