|Reviews for What Have You Done?|
| Guest chapter 10 . 2/16
| xXxOtAkU-444xXx chapter 17 . 1/17
I like it! **
| Rose chapter 12 . 1/14
I already knew you loved me but bye the way love your awesome story too
| Guest chapter 8 . 1/14
WHAT HAPPENED TO NON-LEATHAL FORCE!?
| anacor51 chapter 5 . 12/21/2013
| Ultimate Rasengan chapter 17 . 12/16/2013
Great story, the second half of it wasn't quite as exciting, but was still very well done. The only things I didn't really like was that Naruto was continuosly stuck up to everyone, and I guess he has a point to be and he is suppose to be evil in this fic, but it would have been nice for him to open up to someone. I was hoping he would with Konohamaru, but of course that didn't happen, but I still like the way you ended it.
Another question I have is where is Jiraiya in the story? Going by when Naruto was banished he should have been very very close to Naruto at that point, yet the only time I saw him mentioned in the story at all was was at the very end with one of his spies.
But that's just me being my negative self though haha, other than those two things the story is flawless, and definietly glad I read it. I find myself lately not able to read through a lot of fanfics on this site as I either get bored with them or something happens that I don't like, but with this story I was able to read through all of it and you captured my attention and kept me on the edge of my seat for most of the story, and being able to do that in storytelling is a very big thing and you certainly achieved that in this fic.
All I can say is that this is an awesome fic, I don't know if you even still read the reviews for this story anymore, but if you do I hope you will see my reviw and you will maybe one day comeback and finish it, as it is a very great fic, and me and many others would love to see it completed.
| Ultimate Rasengan chapter 8 . 12/11/2013
Great great story so far. I love that Naruto is evil, but he isn't just completlely psycho like in other stories I've read similar to this one, and they make him so out of character it's not believeable, but in this story Naruto is very believeable in my opinion as he hates Konoha, yet he still does have kindness in his heart, so good job on that.
I'll review again when I finish reading, but so far the story is awesome and can't wait to read more.
| DarkNaruto1032 chapter 11 . 12/5/2013
Loved this chapter! The way you portrayed this Naruto was fantastic and I really like how you incorporated the Uchiha brothers as Naruto's friends. Plus the ending was just amazing! But at the same time so sad. Great chapter! Thank you!
| DarkNaruto1032 chapter 10 . 12/5/2013
This story just keeps getting better! I love this chapter and I can't wait to see how Naruto reacts to Konoha! And how Temari and his old friends affect him! ... Hope fully positively... Thanks again for the great chapters!
| DarkNaruto1032 chapter 7 . 12/4/2013
Wow! This chapter is really good! I can't wait to see how Naruto and his friends will react! Thanks for writing this awesome story!
| DarkNaruto1032 chapter 6 . 12/4/2013
Yay! Amazing chapter! I love how the sand siblings openly accepted him... I would have been sad if they were any less than kind. I wish that Naruto would start to change a little, like how he changed Gaara... so that he wouldn't be so sad and angry. Plus I'm a little nervous about him revealing he's Akatski's leader. What Gaara hates him? I would be DEVASTATED. Totally loved the chapter; great job!
| DarkNaruto1032 chapter 5 . 12/4/2013
Yay! This chapter was amazing! I'm sooooooo happy Naruto didn't and doesn't want to hurt Gaara! But what about the others? Are they actually going to die? ...That would make me kinda sad... And has their plan changed due to their new leadership? I wonder... Thanks again! Great chapter and a perfect follow up!
| DarkNaruto1032 chapter 4 . 12/4/2013
This chapter was pretty good. There were a few slow parts but otherwise it was very good. Also I was wondering if Gaara's Bijuu was taken out and if so how did he not die? Thanks for the chapter!
| DarkNaruto1032 chapter 3 . 12/4/2013
Great chapter! I'm dying to see what happens next!
| DarkNaruto1032 chapter 2 . 12/4/2013
Hey there! you did a great job, I love chapter two just as much as one! I do have a question though: wouldn't Konoha have sent ninja to find Naruto? and what about Naruto's other friends in the rookie nine and Konoha eleven? Thanks for the great chapter!