Reviews for What Have You Done?
Guest chapter 17 . 5/15/2014
Please update it's really Goood I wanna know what happens xD & also on the pairing idea how naruto is solo in this one I feel like a pairing would mess it up just my oppoin but really good xD
Dark Inari Of The Fist chapter 8 . 4/20/2014
You let him get beaten? Sum-bitch, you damn canon lovers.
Cathrach chapter 17 . 4/19/2014
Really cool. Please update, this is a great dark naruto fic!
Narutofan8762 chapter 17 . 4/16/2014
This is a great story. I want to read more and see what happens to Konoha. I'm sure if you add another chapter, you will reach the 1000 reviews you want.
Lacie chapter 7 . 4/15/2014
I love this. Like Harry, Naruto should have been darker. :D It would be natural after all he went through. Good job.
Canada-OS chapter 11 . 4/13/2014
This is a really awesome story, I wish all the best for this story!
Taylor Devline chapter 17 . 4/10/2014
This story is awesome!,can't wait for the next one.
One question...Why haven't you update it yet?,it's been two years since you updated...,and you're getting more favorites and follows like a lot
Guest chapter 10 . 2/16/2014
Me likey
xXxOtAkU-444xXx chapter 17 . 1/17/2014
I like it! **
Rose chapter 12 . 1/14/2014
I already knew you loved me but bye the way love your awesome story too
Guest chapter 8 . 1/14/2014
anacor51 chapter 5 . 12/21/2013
That good!
Ultimate Rasengan chapter 17 . 12/16/2013
Great story, the second half of it wasn't quite as exciting, but was still very well done. The only things I didn't really like was that Naruto was continuosly stuck up to everyone, and I guess he has a point to be and he is suppose to be evil in this fic, but it would have been nice for him to open up to someone. I was hoping he would with Konohamaru, but of course that didn't happen, but I still like the way you ended it.

Another question I have is where is Jiraiya in the story? Going by when Naruto was banished he should have been very very close to Naruto at that point, yet the only time I saw him mentioned in the story at all was was at the very end with one of his spies.

But that's just me being my negative self though haha, other than those two things the story is flawless, and definietly glad I read it. I find myself lately not able to read through a lot of fanfics on this site as I either get bored with them or something happens that I don't like, but with this story I was able to read through all of it and you captured my attention and kept me on the edge of my seat for most of the story, and being able to do that in storytelling is a very big thing and you certainly achieved that in this fic.

All I can say is that this is an awesome fic, I don't know if you even still read the reviews for this story anymore, but if you do I hope you will see my reviw and you will maybe one day comeback and finish it, as it is a very great fic, and me and many others would love to see it completed.
Ultimate Rasengan chapter 8 . 12/11/2013
Great great story so far. I love that Naruto is evil, but he isn't just completlely psycho like in other stories I've read similar to this one, and they make him so out of character it's not believeable, but in this story Naruto is very believeable in my opinion as he hates Konoha, yet he still does have kindness in his heart, so good job on that.

I'll review again when I finish reading, but so far the story is awesome and can't wait to read more.
Naru'sgirl1032 chapter 11 . 12/5/2013
Loved this chapter! The way you portrayed this Naruto was fantastic and I really like how you incorporated the Uchiha brothers as Naruto's friends. Plus the ending was just amazing! But at the same time so sad. Great chapter! Thank you!
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