Reviews for Smooth Criminal
serindraxx chapter 1 . 9/3/2010
AW, this story is sooooo cute and adorable. i loved it!

skulblaka222 chapter 1 . 2/15/2010
I love your story its really cute! :) The only criticism is the beginning paragraph its mainly wordiness: "It was dark in Hogwart’s School of Witchcraft and Wizardry’s Gryffindor boy’s dormitory" is a mouthful-keep it simple... u should possibly not describe lily's appearance because it will be fans mostly reading this and its not really needed. But otherwise i love it-it such a cute story :D.

Oldmanmah chapter 1 . 2/13/2010
Haha. really cute and hilarious. Write more!
Severus my hero chapter 1 . 2/13/2010
Love, Love, Love it!
lookmeintheeyesnickjonas chapter 1 . 2/13/2010
haha very good:) i really like the plotline and the whole story x
Love Among the Ruins chapter 1 . 2/13/2010
I so loved this. It was brilliantly writen and loved the story line.