|Reviews for Unexpected|
| Sweetgalsab chapter 1 . 2/13/2010
I've never really liked Tess, or Mitchie - but AWW! I like Jason/Tess!
This is really good. I love all your fluff. LOL! :D
| chocolatebearturk chapter 1 . 2/12/2010
This was really good! For a habitual Mitchie-basher, you did well with writing her as a nice person. :D
I liked both Tess and Mitchie here, portrayed with a lot of heart and realism. They almost acted like sisters. Also, I like the teensy, tiny, itty-bitty, almost hidden bit you threw in there:
"If there was one thing she’d learned after Mitchie Torres last year at Camp Rock, it was that she was the best at keeping secrets."
Caught ya. :D
But it doesn't matter, because this showcases your talents. You were able to rise to the challenge and write a good fanfiction that depicted Mitchie in a positive light, despite your misgivings. And in such a short time-frame, too! :)
I'm proud, Krissy. Very proud.
Love, love, and love again.