yay! dot disappointed this is great dont stop i want you to continue i love it! i love the idea about the empty book, genius!

youre not going to make robert pattinson edward are you? coz he was absolutely crap in the film.

wow! i never usually go for these type stroies but i just told myself "give it a go" i'm so glad it was your story!, this is amazing i love it!

haha this part

"Audrey, your not in Austrailia anymore" - funny

keep it up cant wait to read the next chapter

love this story, i can't wait to see what happens next! great job. check out 'the stars and the sun' by IsabellaDangelo sometime, it has a similar plot and is written very well