Reviews for Master of War
StoneTheLoner chapter 1 . 3/28
It's disappointing how you chose to start this story :(
WhiteElfElder chapter 17 . 10/27/2016
This story was going great, too bad you lost interest.
WhiteElfElder chapter 15 . 10/27/2016
Fracking Draco...the little snot should be blanked.
WhiteElfElder chapter 6 . 10/25/2016
You stated that the silver tray had 3 rings, but you only described and indicated two.
Chaos Greymistchild chapter 11 . 5/6/2016
Love the AC moment there.

"We work in the Dark to serve the Light."
- Ezio Auditore da Firenze
Tenchi Knight chapter 1 . 2/24/2016
Holy fricking cow... this is messed up! I mean seriously! I didn't even get past the onion bit before I had to post this... dude... this is definitely going on my favorite list for its sheer outrageousness! Good work at horrifying me, it takes a lot anymore, so we'll done!
tanzar81 chapter 15 . 1/15/2016
I just realized that they are going to fill Potter Manor with time traveling Potters. My side hurts from laughing.
tanzar81 chapter 13 . 1/15/2016
Get it right, this is Harry Potter we are talking about. It was a hail storm with lightning and his loving Aunt sewd all the metal she could find onto his jacket...
tanzar81 chapter 11 . 1/15/2016
Seen a few other stories I liked where Mr Weasley was an Unspeakable. And I love it. He always reminded me of some old friends. Too easy going and quiet at times when you would expect someone to get a little riled atleast. Definitely fits the type for an old War Vet.
Guest chapter 5 . 11/2/2015
It's called preview for a reason... You idiot, lol, this is the second time I've almost quit this story due to the damn format, all bold italic underlined...
Guest chapter 3 . 11/2/2015
Might want to fix all the underlining
Fallow52 chapter 17 . 10/17/2015
Kudos :)
firetemplar415 chapter 16 . 10/16/2015
God Damm this story is really good!
Too bad it was adopted by another :(
Guest chapter 17 . 10/13/2015
Aww what a shame, i really liked this one... though I know how it probably became hectic. That's why most writers make it so that time fixes itself with time fics. To stop the paradoxes, and what not. Either allows the traveler to continue on in this time line, and collapses the future. Allows the changes and recalls the traveler to their original timeline, only enabling smaller changes, with great impacts... that's why Hermione is used for time travels, she's quick in her thinking. Harry is brash lol! Bad things happends to witches and wizards who mess with time and what-not...
Guest chapter 16 . 4/25/2015
the last two chapter had a to of spelling mistakes
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