|Reviews for Kables New Mission!|
| Piper Julian chapter 7 . 5/3/2010
Nice ending. I was surprised by Simon being the bad guy. I'm impressed that you are also looking to improve the story for future readers. That shows dedication. The one thing I'd watch out for is spelling and grammar.
| Piper Julian chapter 6 . 4/29/2010
Interesting choice to have the activation language as backwards English!
Interesting idea with the super slayers too, are they genetically altered humans?
| Bre-Wolf666 chapter 6 . 4/21/2010
Awesome chapter! I can't wait for chapter four, please update soon :)
| Bre-Wolf666 chapter 5 . 4/7/2010
:o please write more and check out my Gamer story, it's called " hidden along the others". ]
| Bre-Wolf666 chapter 1 . 4/7/2010
| Piper Julian chapter 5 . 3/24/2010
Good chapter, excellent plot development!
| Piper Julian chapter 4 . 3/17/2010
Interesting twist on having Trace be a traitor!
| Piper Julian chapter 3 . 3/1/2010
Interesting chapter. I wonder if Simon will be caught.
| Piper Julian chapter 2 . 2/25/2010
Pretty awesome! I hope the twins were lying when they said Simon knocked them up!
| Piper Julian chapter 1 . 2/18/2010
Excellent! Can't wait to see where this goes from here! I wonder where Simon is!