At first I had an issue with how the writing was put, but i realy liked the story

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I love the way Naruto gradually makes Sasuke feel alive again.

There are so many plotless and stupid sasunaru fics, but this is something that really gets to you

Please don't stop writing things like this!

if he already has naruto living in his house, then why did he have to turn the card over? the end is exactly like the beginning, besides the smile and picture. but it was good

*laughs gleefully for no reason whatsoever than reading your story*

:)

I can't believe I haven't read this before. I really can't. What was I thinking before now? This is brilliant.

I really like your writing style. This reflective, third-person, bordering existentialistic, puts-me-in-a-contemplative-trance-like writing. XD There's no other way for me to describe it. Other than that I love it.

Life is a very suiting name for Naruto. It's cool how you didn't name him til the end, even though we all knew. It just made Sasuke's inner monologues -loved the thoughts in parantheses) - that much more interesting. :)

Also, I do think you can get drunk on green tea. That was a good part; I totally agree. I believe I've gotten drunk on it once before - it can mess with your head sometimes!

The cooking scene was absolutely adorable. How Naruto surveyed the scene with that knowing, amused look. He saw everything really; lucky for Sasuke, because he's not the most forthcoming of people.

But then the ending! *squeals girlishly on the inside* That was beyond sweet, in a very manly way of course, which made it even more perfect. And how they just knew it was going to happen. No lost or frivilous or extra words at all. And then it just happens.

One of the best SasuNarus ever! It says so much without directly saying anything at all. Just that understanding, so profound. Which is largely due to the brilliance of the author. ;) That would be you!

Well, now that I've spent a good portion of my afternoon glued to the screen with this, I feel i should go do something more productive than drool over your work. ;) Not that I don't love to do it, but it's the last day of vacation, someone needs to put me to work. lol

Again, lovely job! You need to write more so I can read more, you know. :) 'Til then!

xoxoxox

This is such a great story.

One of the VERY best one-shots I have ever read, I'm just so in love with this story.

I LOVE THIS STORY.

i have this stupid smile on my face that won't go away. i don't like romantic stories, they're mostly boring. i read this one twice. it's a beautiful story, i love how the characters r portrayed, i love how Sasuke transforms, i love how their relationship evolves, i love how it's written, the way the words fall into place to make the sentences, it's like silk but warm. :)

Oh my god, this was wonderful! Soooo good! Many thanks!

! THAT WAS SO CUTE! I LOVE THIS AND ALL YOUR OTHER WORKS TOO!

You. You.

36 reviews? I don't believe you.

You have knocked the fucking breath right out of my lungs.

Speechless as I am sitting in front of this dingy computer, I really can't put into type the feeling reading this story evoked in me. Any words I use won't be poetic enough. I don't think I've wanted to review a story so much in my life. To tell you that whatever you were hoping for with this story; whatever beautiful, indescribable feeling you wanted to create; whatever apology you wanted to make: it reached. All of it. Every bit. It reached.

Your words are beautiful. Your portrayal of life and metamorphosis is beautiful. You are beautiful.

Thank you?

Yes. Haha, fuck yes. Yes yes YES. This is story-telling. This is it. This is what I read for.

Thank you, again and again. Thank you. x

Extremely interesting idea and story. I really the believable way Sasuke changed over time. Very well done!

Really well written!

You're awesome! Thank you such much for writing this...

I'm at a loss for words right now, but I feel as if you deserve a review

This story is just beautiful the way it is. And I can't bring myself to add anything else xD

This is absolutely beautiful! :)

This is kind of cute in a brilliant way. :D