Reviews for Yours for an Hour
Kooksmagoogles chapter 1 . 2/16/2010
AH!

I'ts so sweet I can't STAND it!

it makes me wanna cry:(

I WANT MY OWN SOCIALLY STUNTED SASUKE!

This is so cute;P
Moonmoore chapter 1 . 2/16/2010
Quite interesting story, very refreshing too. Good job!
Vio6136 chapter 1 . 2/16/2010
beautifelly written, love it. Such a melancholis Sasuke, very interesting almost invisible twist in Naruto - he's just so much in-character, but there's something not quite...very cool)
Kamaete chapter 1 . 2/15/2010
Oh wow. O.o That's just amazing...amazingly amazing in fact. I love it, it's beautiful...I love the style, and the flow and...well, just everything.
The way you wrote it made me love reading it, and I love how you showed Sasuke kind of, opening up more. Even besides the obvious confiding in Naruto-life-there were the subtle messanges. like him putting up the tree-house, him getting the snti-septic, everything like that. The Life puns were awesome (I call them puns because I don't know what else to call them)-'it's not the first time he felt alive with Life'. It made me estatic! I don't know why! .
arniegrape chapter 1 . 2/15/2010
Have to say that was surprisingly brilliant.

The first time I read it I got confused by Sasuke's thoughts in the parentheses, but after I read it a second time I was finally struck with the imagery and the raw emotion.

I liked it and I hope more like it will come from you.

Thanks for sharing.
Moiya Hatake chapter 1 . 2/14/2010
I'm so happy I took the time to read. The title caught my attention and then the summary and so I followed the link and discovered this amazing story. I don't even have words to describe how much I loved this. I'll be faving it, bookmarking it, recommending it. There are few stories that move me like this one has. Thank you so much for sharing it. :D
Insana chapter 1 . 2/14/2010
I love it!

and i don't have anything else to say... all that i feel reading this is "dude! it's great! I love it!"

rsrsrsrs

sorry again and again for the worst you've read

here now is "carnaval" (i'm form Rio de Janeiro- Brazil)and I'm so drunk right now... and this don't help to right on a langhage that I don't know so weell

sorry again

A great hug for you!

( and I really love this fic!)
SkywardShadow chapter 1 . 2/14/2010
I loved it. Fabulously written, and just...well, fabulous. Great way to end. 5/5
naruss chapter 1 . 2/14/2010
The story was suffocating. But a very good sort of suffocation. It was very intense. You are really good with words. I'm following your works and trying to improve myself.

While reading, I couldn't exactly feel myself. I was in their world, I was feeling what they are feeling, I was seeing what they are seeing -Sasuke's visioning everything, comparing everthing made the story so much better-, I laughed and wanted to cry but it was so intense that I couldn't.

Let me congratulate you dear writer, you did a wonderful job!
SH4RiNG4N chapter 1 . 2/14/2010
Aw, it's beautiful )

And i really liked the ending

Happy valentine's day to u!

x
asdhalksjlaew chapter 1 . 2/14/2010
Thank you very much for this lovely story. It's a delightful read. *
8B chapter 1 . 2/13/2010
I wish I had all of your fics in a book 3

I really loved this one! I'm really jealous of how you can perfectly record sasuke, it's like you just completely get him! Please write another one xD
nostratic chapter 1 . 2/13/2010
This story was amazing. Thank you so much for writing it and for posting...It was beautifully written, and so true to the characters, and just so freaking genuine and real. I love this. thankyouthankyouthankyou. Heh. Haven't read a fic that good in a long time.
SemiiCharmed chapter 1 . 2/13/2010
This is a really adorable story. I love it so much!
beaniejeanie chapter 1 . 2/13/2010
Wow. The style's vastly different but I like it! Very nice! The business Naruto's does is very interesting! I wish someone in my town had one like that! I know exactly what I'd have them do! (grins evily)

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