|Reviews for In Enemy Hearts|
| Embers and Flame chapter 18 . 2/24/2013
Love that Buffy took out Riley, and that Tara made it to them. I can't wait for your next post. I hope Spike wakes up then. Thamk you so much for sharing.
| Seapea chapter 18 . 2/24/2013
You did well in describing the fight between Buffy and Riley. I could really picture it.
| Embers and Flame chapter 17 . 2/23/2013
Thanks for two great chapters in one day.
| SeaPea chapter 15 . 2/21/2013
What a place to end! I have to what's happened to Spike!
Great chapter. So good to have Xander and Willow helping Buffy.
| Embers and Flame chapter 15 . 2/21/2013
Intense chapter. I loved it. Please post more soon. I need to know if Buffy is going to be able to save Spike. Thank you for sharing.
| Embers and Flame chapter 14 . 2/10/2013
Wow... Gotta say that I never saw that coming. Please post more soon. I was notified that you had posted chapter 15, but its not there :( I love this story. Thank you for sharing.
| cavemenftw chapter 14 . 2/9/2013
I really dug this chapter. You seemed like you were getting ready to reach the apex of your story, and though you could feel that a speed bump was coming, I thought you executed the Riley interlude really well. Robo-Riley didn't pontificate and speechify while Buffy and Spike stood and watched, it felt like a realistic amount of time for them to be distracted by RR.
I'm gonna guess, though I know I am wrong. Riley is THE bad guy. Adam has himself locked into every single cyborg that has been created under his reign. Doing this means takes more power than can be stored in his body, so he is constantly jacked into some kind of power grid that allows him to control his creations totally. (hive mind?) Being attached to this power grid renders him helpless though, and after Riley is defeated Buffy finds Spike ant together enter Adams Cavernous lair. They would see him standing attached to a hulking machine with wires entering his body from practically every spare inch along the back and sides of his body. Adams' eyes move but nothing else. The end would basically be about relief,new beginnings and Buffy maybe forgiving herself somewhat.
Cue big celebration that Buffy and Spike would leave as soon as they could keep from being noticed doing so. Maybe Giles, Joyce, and the other two as well.(Tiree and David?)
Anyway I realize things don't necessarily fit for this scenario but it's my guess.
| Seapea chapter 14 . 2/9/2013
You are the worst! What a cliffhanger. I will try to be patient...
| cavemenftw chapter 13 . 2/4/2013
Great before battle scene. The scene before the climax of a story can be tricky to get just right. You gotta capture that feel. Like everyones taking deep breaths and trying to relax, but mostly failing.
| Seapea chapter 13 . 2/4/2013
I'm glad she got to talk to Willow and Xander.
| ginar369 chapter 13 . 2/4/2013
You earned it with a great story!
For a minute there I thought Buffy was actually seeing Willow and Xander alive or turned or something. But that was a wonderful dream for her. Knowing that her friends still love and care about her and don't blame her will ease a burden for Buffy. And having Xander be okay with her and Spike even from beyond the grave is a bonus!
Is it bad of me to have laughed when Riley showed up as a hybrid? (Sorry but I don't like him!)
| Embers and Flame chapter 13 . 2/4/2013
There might not have been much action in this chapter, but it still rocked. I love how Willow and Xander still get to help defeat the bad guy. Thanks.
| cavemenftw chapter 12 . 2/3/2013
I would have loved more Joyce, but what you had was really fun. There's never anything wrong with having some fun with Angel, his character, especially in BTVS really called for it. Good chapter though all in all.
As for the claiming, I like that you went the way you did. I don't know how to review porn anyway, and I'll occasionally skim those bits. I am actually a fan of NC-17 though, in as much as I find the descriptions to be at kinda hilarious, sometimes gross but always entertaining. "Silken Ivory Shaft" Hahahaha, that's my favorite that i have read so far.
Sort of on that topic, do you know what sound constitutes a "mewl"? I have zero clue on that one.
| cavemenftw chapter 11 . 2/2/2013
I feel like I've said all this before, Excellent work on your backgrounds, both character work and setting. You were also very good with all the quiet bits in this chapter. I felt like there was almost something like peace settled over most of this chapter. Tension sure, but there was definitely a calm vibe.
| Embers and Flame chapter 12 . 2/2/2013
Wow when I said post more soon, I was thinking a day or two. Not a half hour lol. Not that I'm complaining. I love this chapter. Buffy got to see her mom, knock around Angel, and mate with Spike. Damn lucky girl. Post more soon.