Reviews for This Thing Between Us
Guest chapter 1 . 11/16/2013
I have 2 teeny criticisms, if that's OK. Firstly, I think this was a little too long to be a one shot. I think it would have been better in shorter chapters. Secondly, it was sometimes a little difficult to tell who was narrating each part.
However, I loved the principle of the story, and the characterisation, and the speed of the relationship growing between the girls, and the writing style.
SwiftiLovaticGleek (can't be bothered to login)
AzurexJen S chapter 1 . 5/1/2012
The title isn't that bad and whatever "lameness" it has is made up for by the excellent storytelling you've done. Really, it's a fantastic read and I hope you continue to write.

Your portrayal of Gelphie is so damn wonderful! I especially like how you did Glinda, and how she dealt with all of it. The whole betting thing is just funny and the steamy parts were, well, pretty damn steamy.

I really did enjoy it, there's a great balance of angst in the beginning and sweet, adorable fluffy fluff around the end. Nice job.
hoglee chapter 1 . 4/16/2012
Haha, Glinda- what a legend. Their relationship in this is PERFECT Gelphie; great job.
Emeralicious chapter 1 . 10/9/2011
I really, really liked this story! There was something deep and realistic about it and the fluff made smile the whole time. Good job!
lilithaofsherwood chapter 1 . 5/31/2011
AWWWW. Just so much sweet sexy fluffiness. It's like a happy pill.
Sammichbatch chapter 1 . 1/13/2011
This is just THE cutest story! :D
ClearRX chapter 1 . 8/8/2010
The story is cute, and I enjoyed reading it. The only problem is the sudden change in POV, which made parts of it extremely confusing... I had to reread a lot of the parts to try and figure out which one of them was thinking/speaking at that time. But other than that, very nicely done!
Emziiee-xxx chapter 1 . 7/20/2010
Sounds like me and my gf. 'You little vampire' Great line *Remembers*

Loved it

Love

Emily
lil Kass chapter 1 . 2/14/2010
WOW...that was an awesome story. When I first saw the play, for the "Loathing" scene, I thought they were falling for each other, so this is perfect.