Reviews for Brotherhood |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Love how detailed you are with your explanation, it really allows the reader to visualize the scenes your making |
![]() ![]() Beautiful work please keep up the good work and add more to this beauty |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ikran look to me like wyvern dragons without scales or fire |
![]() ![]() ![]() when she wanted to sing in Irish and I right there has this uncontrollable urge to sing Panzerlied. I wonder how would the Na'vi react to Panzerlied? |
![]() ![]() ![]() -Author never meant to be quite so "long awaited" -It's been over 12 years since an update. Man, I really hope you pull a rabbit out of a hat sometime soon... This fic is too good to leave unfinished. ~Drunk |
![]() ![]() ![]() Listen. I'm gonna warn you now. I don't care if you haven't logged in in 6 years; If you kill Tsu'tey and Trudy after all this buildup and development, or if it otherwise goes "the same" as the movie in the worst ways, I'm gonna be PISSED after this fuckin whole ass WEEK I will have spent reading this story. It's TOO GOOD of a story to be wasted on that rehash bullshit. It's in too deep to see such subtle, or worse, NO changes from canon. The science team saboteurs, Tommy with Ninat, the girl being sent to Tsu'tey, Trudy's development and involvement, and the site 12 team... You can't leave the final battle anything like the movie. Bruh, I will look for you, and if I find you, I'll scream at you to rewrite it. You're killing my damn heart with this so far... FUCK! ~Drunk ((Also, whatever happens, you need to come back and continue it. Hope you're doing well and still alive and all that.)) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Just gonna leave a plain review saying "this is amazing" because it's literally too good to stop reading for any absolutely unnecessary reason, but it's also so good that I HAVE to say something about it or I'll feel like I didn't do my duty to praise your writing. But fuck me, I hope Tommy's alright. Ninat too... I'm starting to get really worried as we roll up on the destruction of the Tree of Voices and the whole "you aren't one of us" shit, as well as the felling of hometree... By Eywa, I hope your changes to the story are enough to help negate and minimize the severity of the time of sorrow... ~Drunk |
![]() ![]() ![]() I don't think I quite understand your explanation of the singing. Sounds like they're singing in monotone since you said no vibrato, dynamics, or personal intonations. Which is also contrary to the Na'vi singing in the movie, particularly their "amazing grace" equivalent at the Tree of Souls. IDK. Good fic so far, though, and I hope you're doing okay and perhaps plan to eventually update/finish this story. Or if it's already finished, mark it as such, lol. ~Drunk |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great story so far. However, it would be great if you were to finish it as well. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I think it's absolutely hilarious and so adorable that the Na'vi version of puppy dog eyes is puppy dog iears/i |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is so good I’m really loving this, it’s hard to find good stuff for this movie! I think the idea of Tommy being alive too is so interesting, thanks for sharing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I was wondering when Tsu'tey would show up... |
![]() ![]() What do you MEAN hasn't been updated since 2011?! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm a huge fan of this story. I really appreciate the angle you took by including Tom. I (as I'm sure a lot of readers of the fic are doing the same) wonder how much longer are we going to have to wait for the conclusion to this story? the last update was several Years ago. |
![]() ![]() ![]() It's a shame this was never finished, I still come back once a year or so when I get bored to re-read the story, but I've always wanted to see the *Complete* tag next to it for years now |