Reviews for The day we met at the mall
sugarpie123 chapter 4 . 3/16/2012
awzz I hate rwriters block! try having it where Bella and Jasper bond.
X Blue Eyed Demon X chapter 4 . 10/17/2010
lol...so kool!

can't wait to read more!
RandomlyRandomGirl chapter 4 . 5/22/2010
Sorry, I can't think of anything... But I love the chapter! Especially the Cricket playing in the background part!

I hope you can get over your writers block soon! I get it a lot and it's horrible.
83Sebby-Chan83 chapter 4 . 4/26/2010
I love this chapter, especially the cricket in the backround. )

Your stories are always very creative and comicaly! D

-Sammi Riane
83Sebby-Chan83 chapter 1 . 4/26/2010
To whoever 'flamed' this story:

Everyone has a right to write and if you have a problem with her writing and it's just getting under your skin or something, just tell her what she can improve on - we're all here because we are ameuture writers and want other writers' critique to help us improve on our skills or to help other writers.

You may have a right to tell her what she did wrong, but that oesn't mean you have to be rude. (
readingtwilight chapter 4 . 4/23/2010
i do like this story but i think you should write more than just half a page plz!
Santa of Ficmas chapter 1 . 4/21/2010
Your story was not better. Your story, in fact, was made up of every cliche possible in the Twilight fandom, coupled with horrible grammar and punctuation. If you can't think of something a hundred other crappy writers have not already published on here, why write at all?
RandomlyRandomGirl chapter 3 . 4/10/2010
I can't wait to find out what will happen next! Please update soon!
CynthiaaRosee chapter 3 . 4/8/2010
lolz i luv the idea they r sis nd bro!
Samantha Hawkins chapter 3 . 4/7/2010
OMG! Good job! Write more, plz! Or 2least tell me what happens next! )
RandomlyRandomGirl chapter 2 . 3/27/2010
Ha! Poor Edward, Jasper shouldn't have been so mean. XD

Is Bella Jasper's sister or something...? I can't wait to read more! Update soon!
CynthiaaRosee chapter 2 . 3/27/2010
so cute! more plz
Niamh Cullen chapter 2 . 3/27/2010
aww i hate cliffys

please update soon

its really good
hiitsmeagain chapter 2 . 3/27/2010
SAW MY WHATT?

x
AGirlWithMoreThanDreams chapter 2 . 3/27/2010
omg i love it!
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