Reviews for Channel
sparkling apples chapter 1 . 2/2/2014
Enjoyable read!
Kamen Disguise chapter 1 . 12/14/2010
dawww.

lol. oh, Lucas. i always find it funny when u find certain characters that are always just... there.
Liusa-The-Wandering-Maniac chapter 1 . 11/21/2010
Awwwww! Good job! Ya know, I'd never thought of Kouki as a nerd before, but this just makes me see him that way.
aestheticisms chapter 1 . 6/14/2010
Awww (: This was so cute! I love how Jun wanted to punch Kouki to "set things right". This is how I view Jun & Hikari's relationship. You did a wonderful job, I love your Twinleafshipping stories! :D

-RV
Katie chapter 1 . 3/13/2010
That made my day. It's stories like these that keep me firmly in the pokemon fandom. Great job, as usual!
Snoaz chapter 1 . 2/18/2010
What I liked most in this piece was the characterization of Lucas (or Kouki, as you call him). Very nice, him with the rice ball - hah, I get images of Dia - and wanting to teach Hikari all sorts of things. Yes, I really liked that.

I liked it less when Jun came out of nowhere because I'm just really more a Fortuneshipper. But still, Lucas' thoughts of how they completed each other (with their strength / weakness, contemplative nature / temper) was very nicely done. :3

Two mistakes I found:

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He tapped his sneakers on the ground and circumvented the area, deciding of what to impart to Hikari, should the girl come by in the morning.

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Is the 'of' necessary in combination with the verb 'impart'?

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She brought her hand down from her chin and started pulling at tugging at her fingers (...)

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'pulling and tugging', I think?

I love your game-based stories, yes :D (And next time, I will request a Fortune one ;)

~Snoaz
great gospel chapter 1 . 2/13/2010
Hmm, rather interesting. Though I can't say I'm much of a Twinleafshipping fan, this piece /did/ catch - and maintain - my interest. Well-written, and another awesome job. :)

Sora