|Reviews for Perfection In My Eyes x|
| CatLover444 chapter 1 . 5/14/2014
| justme chapter 1 . 11/29/2013
"Well, Ash loves Dawn, and Dawn loves Ash...Bye," He said and closed the door behind himself and locked it. That part was hilarious hahaha damn i love Brock hahahaha not like that hahah XD
| ItzUnknown chapter 1 . 5/13/2013
Awesome story !
In the end, the line where‘s Pikachu said by Dawn makes me realized where did Pikachu went
| z shadow619 chapter 1 . 4/2/2012
Roflwaffle poor Pikachu. Great Story!
| methski chapter 1 . 5/15/2011
Pikachu was left in the cafe? hahahaha
| pikachu and ash chapter 1 . 12/6/2010
"Where's Pikachu?"ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ah ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha keep on writing this is so late in the night that i am breaking up hysterical by the words "Where's Pikachu?
| GitahMuttan chapter 1 . 10/11/2010
Anywho great story !
I want more!
| Teengamer chapter 1 . 9/14/2010
Yeah, it's a little stupid and a little cheesy, and I don't like the almost-swears and I thought the kiss was a little rushed...
BUT other than those things I enjoyed it! :D Not bad at all.
| CandidCandy chapter 1 . 6/10/2010
That was a beautiful story, I love the ending! xD "Where's Pikachu?" xD
Keep story writing, keep doing what you do and you have yourself a nice day! xD Baha.
| jigsaw324 chapter 1 . 4/25/2010
Really great story!
| AlphaFan chapter 1 . 3/18/2010
Yes, that was excellent. Subscribed, and Author and Story added to favorites.
| Leemix chapter 1 . 3/16/2010
...Your gran died? RIP. anyway, great story,
| Shimmer Dawnstar chapter 1 . 3/14/2010
Sorry for your Grandmother, I hope she rest assured in heaven.
Now for the story, can't deny it's good. Congrats :)
| RustKnight chapter 1 . 3/6/2010
Very nice story.
It's... heart warming
| satoshi and hikari forever chapter 1 . 2/20/2010
hey this is pretty good! I like it when brock says,"Well dawn i 've got bad ne- Ash?" and locked ash and dawn in a room. LOL Well I feel sorry for your a few days ago*shudders* i 'll honor her