|Reviews for Take a Look Through His Eyes|
| Jayelyyn chapter 1 . 9/23
I've always been in love with "reading the books" stories. This is a better and less cliche start than most. One flaw...Molly and Arthur definitely would not have been in school with Lily and the Marauders.
| luckbringer chapter 5 . 7/28
I know you haven't updated this in a while, but I really hope you plan to continue it soon! I love how you write the characters - you add a whole new life to that wonderful first book. As for your two questions, I think Harry should be one of the last people you introduce. His appearance will probably put the reading on hold for a while as the Potter family embraces. (We're not dealing with paradoxes, right? Good) And we (the readers) are expecting to learn who's crossing the time lines here! I love the growing relationship between James and Lily. Maybe some more time outside of the headmaster's office? At dinner or afterwards, in the common room, there could be space for a couple fluffy moments. Or maybe Snape and Lily (or James) have an argument or two? Just some ideas to get your brained fired up. I hope I'm not the only one waiting on the next chapter with baited breath. Please keep writing! :)
| francesthehuman chapter 1 . 7/26/2014
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON
| seblackburn4 chapter 5 . 8/29/2013
this is good I look foward to what comes next. and It woul be gret if Fred & George showed up and no more romance things are good the wy they are but I don't mind either way.
| 0521804 chapter 5 . 4/26/2013
yes to question 2
| LadyDeviant95 chapter 5 . 1/18/2013
answer 1: fred & George!
answer 2: when they go to diagon alley or platform 9 3/4
answer 3: HELL YEAH! OTPOTPOTP
| Gabby chapter 5 . 12/19/2012
hi, this story is AWESOME! having pretty much the same reactions as Sirius and James almost all the time... :'D
maybe introduce Harry when they go to Diagon Alley? Not sure about Neville and definitely more romance between James and Lily
| Hunter of Slytherclaw chapter 5 . 12/31/2011
Absolutely love your story! Please update soon. As for your questions:
Q1: I would like to have Fred and George come in, them with the Marauders ensures chaos!
Q2: I think Harry ad Neville would come after the Sorting
Q3: Besids LE/JP Ithin there should be some Harry/Ginny once he comes in and Ron/Hermione
| Kernal Dirty Corn chapter 5 . 9/17/2011
If you're going to give the meaning afterwards, why even put ROFL?
| reader chapter 5 . 5/9/2011
Ans 1. Other than Harry and Neville, I thinkk it would be nice to introduce Luna and mabye even Kreacher (Sirius will be really surprised with his new behaviour!)
Ans 2. I think you should introduce Neville in the next chapter and Harry, a few chapters after that.
I think the amount of romance in the story is perfect, there is no need to increase it at all.
I'm really enjouing reading your story, please do update soon!
| RavenclawEncyclopedia chapter 5 . 4/4/2011
Baby Teddy should come with Harry and Neville, who should show up soon. I also think that Fred and George should come, possibly from a few weeks before they moved Harry to the Burrow in DH.
| kittykatkitkat chapter 5 . 4/4/2011
| TwiLoco chapter 3 . 2/13/2011
| ShannyC1901 chapter 5 . 2/6/2011
I noticed you haven't updated for a while and I was hoping you'd finish the story as I love it. Maybe Harry and Neville could turn up together in the next chapter or two? As for any other characters it would be cool for Luna to show up. :) Anyways love to read more of the story please please please finish it! :)