|Reviews for You Too|
| GalaxyGirl chapter 1 . 7/31/2014
Oh Goddd. Lassie...
| Kylie Robbins chapter 1 . 5/26/2010
Yeah...some peopledo stupid things when they're drunk
| invisalite chapter 1 . 2/20/2010
Aw... I like it. It's cute.
Some things I saw in here:
...which didn’t help the drums banging inside his head calm down.
-"banging inside his head (to) calm down" I think makes it flow better.
‘luv you shawn’
-I personally think that Lassiter would spell everything out on text. He would be one of those people who are so stuck to the rules that he'd HAVE to retain proper spelling and stuff EVEN in texts. Or maybe that's just how Carlton seems to me.
These are just suggestions though, and you definitely don't have to listen to them if you feel that they don't work.
Thanks for the great story!
| SweetPotato chapter 1 . 2/14/2010