Reviews for Enfariné
Guest chapter 1 . 5/2/2013
Rin 'chan' is rather... a very typical crude girl...If u don't mind me saying so...XD But asie from that, I find your fic very interesting and well played, since you had to tell it from Hanabusa's POV. I have quite the hard time trying to put myself in character's shoes, but this, in my personal opinion, was well done! XD
GuardianAngel24 chapter 1 . 7/27/2012
I really liked your story. I hope u add more to this story. I'm a big fan of this series too :D
forgive-forget-princess chapter 1 . 12/24/2010
please continue writing for this couple, attempt romance/drama and im sure you'll get ALOT of reviewing, I granted you that if you do I'll spam review you :DD
tentsubasa chapter 1 . 10/20/2010
Poor Hanabusa-kun. He had an extremely rough day.
Gittiej chapter 1 . 5/27/2010
I like this story a lot! I did see some minor mistakes.

For example, you wrote Asano-san in stead of Amano-san a few times.

Another thing, in the anime, Ichigo calls Satsuki by his last name, Hanabusa-kun. I'm not sure if that's different in the manga..

I see a lot of mistakes like these in fanfiction, and that's a shame. In Japan, you can see how close people are by looking at how they adress them. Changing this seems like the characters have gotten closer or the other way around.

But overall, very nice plot and good writing.
just-oneofthe-reader chapter 1 . 4/5/2010
good had captured Hanabusa-kun's way of thinking..though i think the names were quite in a mess.. Asano Ichigo should be Amano Ichigo... and I think the K_ is Kashino though I am not sure...

hope there would be a second chapter~
ANIMELOVER chapter 1 . 3/21/2010
xXxChoco-BunnyxXx chapter 1 . 3/2/2010
i love ur first chapter! please update!
SUJU3LOLZVIKKI-CHAN chapter 1 . 2/22/2010
OMG! I love the ichigoxsatsuki pairing! Plz hurry on ur next fanfic! I can't wait! I'm a HUGE fan of yumeiro patissiere! This one kinda ended abruptly tho, o well hoo cares? It still rocked! I 3 SATSUKIxICHIGO!
hisuigreen chapter 1 . 2/22/2010
"Illuminated"? Don't you mean eliminated? I caught that by just skimming this story. Please make sure to double check your writing.

~ Sandi