Reviews for Echoes in the Night
xBitterSweetDreamsx chapter 1 . 4/8/2016
Omg! I heard this story when I was like 9 and it freaked me out. So that's what the story is called.
Great version of the story. I started to suspect the story as soon as the licking began lol.
Primus2021 chapter 1 . 10/25/2013
Can I request 2 Lemons...

1: BurningGreymon / Takuya_Kanbara XxX Zephyrmon / Zoe_Orimoto!
2: Aldamon / Takuya_Kanbara XxX Jetsilphymon / Zoe_Orimoto!
ApprenticeOfDaedalus chapter 1 . 4/4/2013
Kouichi, you noob! You're the Warrior of Darkness! You should like this story!
AquaBluey chapter 1 . 8/26/2012
ok i like it but (dont take it the wrong way) to me kinda of a sad ending and kinda of scary for me sorry plz dont hate me :'(
Mimatofan chapter 1 . 3/7/2010
That was sick. lol. Very gruesome. That poor dog though. I'd rather it be Zoe. That girl drives me nuts.
BanetteGirl chapter 1 . 3/4/2010
i with kouichicon this one freaky so who was there masked killer that licks that is what i want to know now
truemasterhaseo chapter 1 . 3/2/2010
I heard a legend like it once except it was more specific.

The girl was home alone durring a thunderstorm and is frightened by the thunder so she sleeps with her dog (also a golden retriever) and whenever she wakes up she gets the dog to lick her hand to make sure he's still there. This happens a few times and when she wakes up she finds her dog, dead and hanging from the shower head (by its collar presumably) and written on the wall is "The Jersey Devil can lick hands too".

I'm not sure but I think that's the original. But I prefer your version. Good job!
Pocketbook chapter 1 . 2/28/2010
That was so creepy! But I'm glad they didn't die...but who would do that to a dog! Jeez, people are freaks. Anyway, good story. It actually really scared me, I didn't realize I was trembling slightly until now, haha.
bluekat21 chapter 1 . 2/16/2010
OMG! That was beyond creepy lol -_- And now I'm freaking out cause I have a doggie that licks my hand O_o

Wah! What a creepy dude. And it's so weird cause I've never heard of the urban legend but hey! I was on my seat until the end lol _ anyways. Great one-shot! I loved it... Though sadly I think Zoe and Takuya died here O_O
Reiji Ishiya chapter 1 . 2/14/2010
I think they die at the end of the urban legend, but that's just me. But back to the point, this was a good story.

Happy Valentines Day.
ValiantOne1 chapter 1 . 2/14/2010
Its a good thing that I don't own a dog... I think. Nice "Valentine's Day" oneshot. I never heard of that legend before, but I guess I know now. *Locks doors* I should really start sleeping with a pillow under knife...
Blacker Side of the Shadows chapter 1 . 2/14/2010
What a disturbingly awesome urban legend. Plenty of bloodshed, but it did mess with me that the dog had to die. poor puppy.
utsukushii04 chapter 1 . 2/14/2010
OMG! I dont let my dog sleep in my room or any room, but he has his own bed in the center of all the rooms, you can say. But now that I'm looking at him, thank goodness it's jsut a legend right? Well, great oneshot! I hope all goes well!
dingcs chapter 1 . 2/14/2010
AH, WHAT THE FRIG? That totally freaked me out if you didn't notice. Haha. But that was seriously creepy. CREEP ALERT! for the person who was licking Zoe's hand. I've never heard of this legend story before, but now that I have from this story, I'm gonna freak out every night before I go to bed. Haha, yeah, just sitting there hyperventilating myself to sleep. ...Now I'm paranoid. xD

I love how Takuya was going to accuse Kouji of murder. xD

Kouji: *walks in with a bloody knife* Phew! That was alot of hard work.

Me: O_O W-what were you doing?

Kouji: I was wo-

Me: AGH DON'T KILL ME! *runs away*

Kouji: I was working at my uncle's butcher shop...

Great one-shot, though you should continuing it by adding another chapter or something. I would read it. But you don't have to.
pika25 chapter 1 . 2/14/2010
Hmm. Interesting. A frightful Valentine's Day about an urban legend. Haven't seen or heard it before, so I appreciate the history lesson here, B&B.

The only opening here was that disabled lock basement window. Unsure about Izumi's room door if Sammy was the victim. "Humans can lick too" huh? Well I got news for ya. You ain't the only one. Only difference between you and me is, I devour you MF-in serial killers.

Good story as always. Once I'm done eating this loser who's only role was to lick people's hands (seriously, are you F-ing stupid!) and give myself some Zs for the night, I'll try to catch up on the rest of your updated stories. Be well, B&B. Thanks for the delicious story.
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