Reviews for Sweet Success
Orihime-18 chapter 2 . 7/10/2020
Haha the date was always a disaster for so many interruptions lol...and the last part was really cute and sweet their just ignoring their audience while having a passionate kiss and for ichi to tel those words is way kay re sweet beautiful story this is great :)
bowlfullofcherries chapter 2 . 6/4/2018
This is frickin lovely. Loved it. Wow. Two thumbs up.
kalmaegi chapter 2 . 4/8/2018
I can't believe those two...*giggles* I should have known their planned dates would end up as a disaster while their spontaneous hang outs are a lot more better.
Guest chapter 1 . 7/7/2017
You are so good at writing their 'awareness' of each other. When Ichigo sat down next to Orihime and spread his hands aling the bench and behind her back I stopped breathing from tension! Writers who can write ust well are truly exceptional.
Aurona X chapter 2 . 6/28/2016
Yeah. Their "normal" dates can't seem to turn out right. but for a pair of abnormal teenagers that is to be expected!
PurseMonger chapter 2 . 2/24/2016
Adorable and WAFFY!
jessi chapter 2 . 2/11/2015
Love it make more like this plz
A Midsummer chapter 2 . 7/23/2014
Hilarious awkward dorks. They can't even date without someone tagging along.
Guest chapter 2 . 4/30/2014
its so fluffy im gonna die
nlinz chapter 2 . 1/17/2014
Can I just say that was seriously one of the best IchiHime fan fictions I have ever read in my entire otaku life?! The ending was beyond perfect and UGH I WANT MORE FLUFF MORE MORE WE WANT MORE (little girl from progressive commercial) *starts to sob dramatically from fan fiction and gets down on one knee* MARRY ME
Guest chapter 2 . 10/31/2013
That's right, pretty damn sweet!
Effervescent Love chapter 2 . 1/13/2013
Nice long chapter.
Great grammar and everything.
And my favorite couple, Ichihime. :)
Keep up the great worK!
Effervescent Love chapter 1 . 1/13/2013
Lovely. Your writing is sweet and fluffy here.
naleah chapter 2 . 12/27/2012
Aww... it is so romantic for thier lovestory.
KatzeNoel chapter 2 . 6/23/2012
that was great
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