Reviews for Takari: Little Red Box
takarifan chapter 1 . 10/16/2013
This was really a good fanfic im might start writing then
Great Angemon chapter 1 . 9/1/2012
That was really good. Cute, and sweet.
the alpha phoenix chapter 1 . 1/3/2011
Great story, I love it :D
SammyJoe24 chapter 1 . 6/24/2010
It was so sweet that it made me tear up a little. It was really well-written, too.
Vellona chapter 1 . 4/15/2010
Aww that was so cute!
gardensigernumbli chapter 1 . 3/21/2010
Woah, that's a lot of adjectives. It's nice to see someone who doesn't always use the same cliched words over and over again, but I think it might be a too much in some places.

For example one wouldn't really glower at a box the same way one would swoon over a cute cat. It's not the same thing at all.

I liked the story though.
Pleaki chapter 1 . 3/7/2010
First of all, Aw! This was very sweet and touching. I absolutely loved how you included every little detail. It painted the picture of what was happening quite beautifully. Everyone was in character. Even Daisuke with his obnoxious perkiness towards Hikari. I specifically loved the phone call between Hikari and Miyako. Especially the "-and that's when I totally figured, Ken is so a mint chocolate kinda guy, am I right, Hikari? Doesn't he just seem like the mint chocolate kinda guy to you too?" That made me laugh pretty hard. XD

But yeah, this was a lovely story. You're a fantastic writer. Keep it up!

(This is KnuxZ from DA, by the way. ;D)
Daikarifan chapter 1 . 3/7/2010
Well I personally think it was silly. They don't end up together anyway, even though people are deluded enough to think they do. But the main reason is that you're putting Kamiya down like she's an angel, and she's anything but! Plus in the beginning of the story, you pretty much insulted every kind of chocolate maker out there! That was silly thing about it. I would love to see a Daikari or TK/Yolei pairing or something for once!
LockeErasmuspolnet.gov chapter 1 . 2/25/2010
Good story, it was very touching. Haven't seen one of these in a while. By the way, does "little red box" have anything to do with "little red book"? though I guess those are two separate countries...
theTIGEER chapter 1 . 2/21/2010
I think you just made my day, I've been frantically looking for a RECENT takari, but to my luck only finding fics from years ago. and to find such a well written story from THIS year, amazed me.

so yeah, you're my new hero. ahaha, well I really liked this one :D but what age were Takeru and Hikari in this one? that's the only thing I'm wondering xp
Dr. William Bell chapter 1 . 2/17/2010
Amazing. As one-shots go, this was very good. The idea was good, and you fit the couple well to it. That last scene between the two was great, and makes you feel the Valentine's day spirit. Well done!
Uchiha-Kirara chapter 1 . 2/14/2010
Aww, this was SO cute *_*

I really, really, really enjoyed reading this! :)

Though it makes me really upset to know that my Valentine's Day was a real disappointment (unlike Kari's of course ;))

*sighs*

I think the best part was when Kari was preparing her gift for TK :3

I don't know why, but I just felt so happy and the situation was so understandable x3

Kari's reactions were just..how I'd do them :D

Aww x3
collateraldamage-x chapter 1 . 2/14/2010
Aw, this was so cute. I think my favorite was the banter between Hikari and Taichi. I'm so into fics that display their sibling relationship. Most people overplay it or make it completely horrible, but you did just perfect! I loved it.

Now for the main couple, Hikari and Takeru. That was just adorable. I was begining to get worried because of the tears, running away, and Daisuke. Oh, Daisuke. I love the boy but he can be just so stubborn and ignorant :P But the end was just perfect. I loved that you put that Hikari "Lost her lip virginity" that was a much more interesting way than the usual "they kissed" or "their lips met". All in all, I loved it and I'm very anxious and open to read more from you.
Ris Fallon chapter 1 . 2/14/2010
I don't know if I have words to explain this. It was so realistic and yet such fluffy sappiness that I'm not really sure how to describe how my brain processed it. I've always loved chocolate-exchange stories, because it's such a simple tradition for people to focus on that it's become a bit of a cliche, particularly among fanfiction writers. But at the same time, no story is exactly the same. And I think you portrayed their characters amazingly; it's pretty much exactly how I'd imagine them getting together. One of them would just kinda snap, and I imagine Hikari would be the one to attempt to take initiative and try back away at the last moment and Takeru would take one step forward and... yeah.

Man. I feel like a horrible writer now. Thanks. :P

Amazing; I always love reading your writes. (: