|Reviews for A family bond|
| Guest chapter 3 . 12/8/2017
good thing I'm planning a good one and show failures like you and mionefan a big failure who quit on the greatest series ever harry's bond and you fail to keep on going with one and blackrose
| Ilena Petrova chapter 29 . 10/8/2017
Did you ever start this rewrite ?
| sasel chapter 29 . 7/29/2017
I hope you continue soon
| Richard chapter 17 . 11/29/2016
Your Have a good story just a few error typing
Malfow - Malfoy
Amassing - Amazing
| 8465338DeleteAccount chapter 29 . 11/23/2016
Well everyone can lose track and so you need a break. I hate finding story to read then you find a good one it is abondon or up for adoption. But I'm glad to see you will come to this one. So please update soon.
| The Angel of the Night chapter 29 . 10/25/2016
I have enjoyed this story so far! You have a few flow things to smooth over, but you're doing way better than I've been getting with my works in the long stories department. I really liked your story idea that you posted in chapter 9, but sadly the pm button is not working for me (really the internet on my computer and I'm having to use my phone for this and I'm still trying to figure out everything T.T) so I don't know if you are still waiting on the story idea. I did start reading this story today and read all the through (means it really good!) and I haven't had a chance to look and see if you said anything about it on your profile/bio page. I do enjoy your pairing choice mainly because I do enjoy them together as well as the few I've read giving them a good plot line to fall into that pairing. I also enjoyed there being family still alive somewhere and also Sirius saving Harry and giving him a new life. Your story made me think of "Dragon's Jewel" (I belive that's right) which is a hp crossover with Yu Yu Hakusho with the pairing of Kurama and Harry (who can switch forms between girl and boy after an accident with a dragon jewel and prefers to be a girl more often than not) and Sirius is the one to help Harry make a life away from the British Wizarding Wold in Japan. I think you may enjoy reading it and you could get an idea on how you want your own story to flow better just by relaxing and doing something else than forcing yourself to think over it. Just relax and read something and usually it helps with writers block as well as get great ideas out of the blue while doing it. So thank you again for your story. It was quite enjoyable to read and get lost in it plus it was happier than most of the stories that I kept finding, and it really made my day all the more enjoyable. I hope you figure out what you want to do and continue on with it. Hope everything works out for you as well. This is the story link for "Dragon's Jewel" : s/7349598/1/The-Dragon-s-Jewel
Enjoy if you feel like trying to read it!
| Guest chapter 29 . 10/22/2016
Well I hope you find what your looking for and come back to this and others soon
| blackflamesredblood chapter 29 . 8/3/2016
Please update soon
| Guest chapter 9 . 7/25/2016
Hi! I really like the story idea and the way it's written. However I noticed quite a lot of spelling mistakes and i wondered if you have ever thought of letting your story ('s) be beta read. I am not an official beta but would still love to help anyway. Of course it's your decision. Pls don't think I am trying to flame you or anything! Anyway, love the story and pls continue.
| Grovtech chapter 10 . 7/10/2016
I remember what you said about those wards guarding Canada, but honestly I kept flinching every time her real identity was revealed. It's the perfect cover, but Michiru isn't even trying to keep a low profile. She could easily pass as her Aunt's kid or even adoption to get pass being kidnapped by Sirius.
I know that now he's been cleared, and even earlier by the Canadians, but still.
very interesting stuff!
| Guest chapter 3 . 6/28/2016
Really. I read all through the happy stuff just to find out Harry is a girl. Fuck you.
| BoricuaBookworm chapter 29 . 3/26/2016
I know this note says you aren't abandoning it but after so many years I wonder when you'll actually continuing. Please continue I really like this story
| Pushi19 chapter 29 . 6/24/2015
| lynn.ann.31 chapter 29 . 3/11/2015
please update great story
| Jamie Johns chapter 29 . 11/3/2014
More chapters please.