Reviews for Accidental Companions |
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![]() ![]() ![]() wow this was great |
![]() ![]() I love it I come back to this story so many times |
![]() ![]() POV: u realize the author hasn't posted in more than 9 years |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm sorry but a story like this needs an ending, it's almost criminal not to finish it, and then to stop where you did. It doesnt even need to continue after he's either healed or dead just a resolution in a way that fits the story. It's got great character development and the flow is really good and it's not a typical naruto fanfic focused on jutsu and fights. It's a great short story that could end in 2 more chapters or continue for enougher 20. Anyway great work even though it broke my heart to see it hadn't been updated in like 10 years. |
![]() ![]() EEK I NEED MORE CHAPTERS |
![]() ![]() ![]() bruh honestly fuck sakura she's a bitch saying shit like that only bc he's about to die. Bro fuck her and fuck her bullshit but i wonder what happened to naruto. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Bruh sakura is a fucking hypocrite bro saying a card would suffice and yet she didn't even think of his birthday bro it's bs she doesn't deserve to feel guilt or anything she part of the entire problem and a big one at that bro honestly. But how you portrayed Sasuke would honestly make sense. Contemplating the words of his elder brother and like thinking of naruto's words. He's still a bastard though and I can't wait for KAKASHI GUYS MOST YOUTHFUL RIVAL to return. Other than that really good chapter. And I'm happy you actually have naruto care about the konohamaru corp, unlike cannon. I feel like he just ignores them for "SAKURA-CHAN WILL U GO OUT WITH MEEEE!" and gets his ass punched and wastes his time chasing her bitch ass, or its "SASUKEEEEEE! I'LL MAKE YOU COME BACK" and again gets his ass kicked its like he forgot about all the better freidns he made on his journeys. AND HE WEARS ORANGE TO TOP IT OFF AND IS NOT SHINOBI MATERIAL BRO HUH. Well anyways have a nice day. |
![]() ![]() ![]() yessssssssssssssss he got his memories good chapter. Fuck sakura and ino too bro they bitches. And ye i think the sound shockwave is clean. Even the 9 tails used it to break buildings during his attack i remember. Naruto fucked up kabuto uglah and in turn almost resulted in sakuras death another reason i love the attack, and sai. |
![]() ![]() ![]() broooooooooooo letsssssssssssssssssssss fucking gooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo please don't pull some stupid shit with kakaahi denying his request and stuff. Also about guruko bro like he went through with it. Don't get me wrong i like to see suffering but loosing your memories is the most frustrating thing in the entire world like it happened in tokyo ghoul and it was so bad to the point i wanted to die rather then watch the show. And then they are so cliche about it to saying "Why does my head hurt" or "Something isn't right" and shit like dude don't ignore it investigate it dude. But it bittersweet it like a twisted straw for me i like it but its frustrating. More of a feeling of satisfaction like the climax. But i don't know how to explain it but other than that thank you i love you no homo for having him leave team 7's bitch ass. Don't get me wrong i love kakashi but thank you i hate sakura and sasuke. Now then i wonder will guruko stay with I don't think he will. I hope he does but then kakashi would loose him and naruto can't provide for him and all these factors playing in bro. But ye this chapter was good. OH AND FUCK SASUKE! He doesn't deserve to feel guilt now he's being a hippocrit. Bro I swear its annoying and i hope you do something so he can become a medic bro. Please fix his chakra control when he gets the operation. And fuck sakura for taking his place. Though if you came up with this it's pretty cliche. But then there's the possibility it has happened to you before. Oh well. That's why you keep secrets but let out enough info for people not to snoop around. And hopefully crushing their dreams. BUT PLEASE MAKE NARUTO STRONGER THAN CANONN AND WHY DOES HE STILL CARE ABOUT TEAM 7. As guy would say about his treatment THAT IS VERY UNYOUTHFUL. If they have said it of course hehe. Anyways enough of my rambling have a nice day. |
![]() ![]() ![]() bro, honestly you make no sense dude how could he still consider them family bro what the fuck especially with how they never liked him and how his life is going to shit even more. Dude, they would be the least of my worries at the moment. Honestly bro I don't know why he wants to protect or talk to them when they never returned the favor. He likes them so much for no reason. He has every reason to hate them bro so honestly, it makes no sense. It really pisses me off, dude. No one is that loving and forgiving not even cannon naruto, and he forgave everyone! Bro, honestly he knows they are a part of the problem, so why is he denying the solid facts and truth and being a naive bitch. Bro, honestly it's what's keeping the story's potential from reaching the max. And I bet you right now that he'll love them even if they glare at him like the villagers. If you gonna put that in there bro then make sure he doesn't think of them as family. But other than that this story is too interesting to put down. Honestly, I really love the idea and plot bro. And how you explained his sickness was creative I wouldn't have guessed. I can't wait for him to tell team 7 to fuck off though I hope they aren't gonna be hypocrites when they figure out and shit bc honestly fuck them. I would have killed them by now or just ignored them. Or put up with it they fuck them when your chuninn. |
![]() ![]() ![]() fuck sakura too bro why do you still have him put up with the 3 of them saying hell protect them and their family that's not what family is the fuck bro I swear. But I hope you do something with Neji or sum and fuck Sakura and Sasuke and Kakashi is tripping balls like Jiraiya they tryna get his ass killed lol. I hope he still doesn't like sakura bc at this point I'll stop reading it. No one in their right mind would like people like them bro. No matter what whether they're on the same team or not bro. It doesn't make sense and it's frustrating when he puts up with them saying shit like they're his friends when they're not lol. But enough ranting. This is good so far bro I like the story's progression. But I hope you make him stronger than cannon, please. OH OH OH! DON'T, I REPEAT DON'T, HAVE HIM MAKE THE PROMISE TO SAKURA ABOUT BRINGING SASUKE BACK BC HONESTLY SHE DON"T DESERVE ANYTHING MORE THAN SHIT. |
![]() ![]() ![]() this is sooooooooooooooooooo gooooooooooooooooooodddd I love this fanfiction bro i love the premis of him taking care of kakashis dog and how he don't like his teammates very much bc i hate them both but something that would ruin it would be you making this naruhina maybe no romance or someone else like temari or sum like that or someone who understands his pain like an oc character definitely not sakura bro but yeah |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is probably the best fanfic I ever read |
![]() ![]() ![]() Is there more chapters coming? |
![]() ![]() Did you stop the it there? It was good as long as it lasted |