|Reviews for Collecting|
| Onyx the Shy chapter 11 . 2/12
That was wonderful. Thank you for sharing.
| Dontgotaclue88 chapter 11 . 6/14/2012
LMAO! This was such fun to read thank you! ,
| Janneia chapter 11 . 4/8/2012
Awww... I wanted to see Dan sputter. Or be speechless... And it's the last chapter, already? *pouts*
| suzieqbear chapter 3 . 3/8/2012
"She frowned at them and apologized because it seemed like the kind of thing you are supposed to do when you accidentally hit someone in the eye with a stick."
this made me laugh outloud. very nicely done.
| Bono Tempest chapter 11 . 7/30/2011
Heya orange sea. love the plot line and story, lots of fun to read. You have no idea how weird it is to read a story when one of the main characters has your name, though I don't shorten it to Dan. It's strange cause I'm quite like Dan in the story. I'm a major tomboy and I'm enrolled in martial arts too. creepy huh!:D Fantastic paragraphing and vocab. keep writing!
good luck with your next story. signed a undercover author
| Vampirenightbeauty chapter 11 . 7/9/2010
it's a good idea and i enjoyed reading it considering i usualy go for m rated stories so for your to capture my attention and keep it there deserves a round of applause for i can tell you keeping my attention to one story at a time is not easy.
| shiva chapter 1 . 4/28/2010
Oh my God, that is adorable! (I'm assuming Jareth is staging this adventure for Dan.) Fantastic - I would love to see more of this :)
| Roia chapter 11 . 4/15/2010
I really really loved this story, short and sweet, well written with good use of an original character, and it totally made me laugh. Bravo :)
| Sallafe K chapter 11 . 4/15/2010
"But Sarah, this is the Goblin King's castle!"
Anywhoo, loved it muchos. :D
Dan's a really good character-Sarah-ish in a completely un-Sarah way. Now I've gotta go check out the rest of your stuff!
| koosei chapter 11 . 4/10/2010
:D I laughed out loud at Jareth's last line! I can just seem standing behind Dana with a look of annoyance while he corrects her.
a quick read, but I found I really liked the idea of a second runner going to save Sarah from Jareth's attempt at courtship. _ very fun to read *thumbs up*
| Nanenna chapter 11 . 4/6/2010
A delightful end indeed! I wish we could have seen some of their courtship, but a satisfying end either way. I really enjoyed the ride you took us on!
| tichtich2 chapter 11 . 4/6/2010
O. ! i think it is safe to say that was a very satisfying ending :D im glad i stuck it out to the end :D and the fact you ended it on dan descovering that sarah is getting married to the goblin king is just priceless i can see dans face now in the type of WTF ! expression :D Lol just priceless utterly priceless. well thank you for a great story and a great ending normaly great stories end badly but i think i rather like this ending ... in a way jareth kinda get the last laugh or in this case the last word :D LOVE IT!
your faithfull reviewer
| xXxMusexXx chapter 11 . 4/6/2010
That CANNOT be the end!
That was really good! The ending was sweet, though I wish it wasn't the end quite yet...hehe.
| YarningChick chapter 11 . 4/6/2010
ROFL! That ending was perfect! Too bad we couldn't see Dan's reaction to THAT revelation.
But one question; If Jareth turned Sarah into a princess so he could court her, what was her kingdom?
| TarjaRocksMyWinterStorm chapter 10 . 4/6/2010
oh yeah,i *have* an account but i can't login on my dsi :P