|Reviews for Renegade|
| thelegendarysupernerd chapter 18 . 11/19/2014
This is an amazing story. I hope there will eventually be more.
| thelegendarysupernerd chapter 9 . 11/19/2014
Damn this is cool.
| thelegendarysupernerd chapter 1 . 11/19/2014
Wow. I like this Shepard. A hard man, but a good man.
| Zarohk Korobase chapter 1 . 4/14/2014
Interesting beginnings. I look forward to seeing more of this. For a good woman Renegade friendship with Garrus, check out "Kingdom of Rust". Your Renegade is interesting because he's so aggressively hostile and hot-tempered, while the one in "Kingdom of Rust" is more distant and cold.
| A Dozen Lemmings chapter 19 . 4/11/2013
More More MoreMORE!
| A Dozen Lemmings chapter 2 . 4/11/2013
Jesus...I, Wow. That was incredible. I admit I don't play the Mindoir Survivor often (twice out of seven playthroughs I think.) Mostly because of this scene. It's so well done that by the time I finish it I feel absolutely drained.
| Incoqnito chapter 6 . 10/19/2012
| RaveTDC chapter 1 . 8/25/2012
I have to say, this is one of my favorites. I'm a long-time lurker, and I haven't come across another instance in which I can appreciate the pragmatism displayed as much as in this story. Renegades usually devolve into bloodthirsty maniacs or annoying "badass" clichés. It's refreshing to find someone who enjoys the concept of the Greater Good.
Also, it has to be said that this would've been my canon playthrough if this option existed in-game.
I also agree with your statement that you indeed dared and DID improve on Miranda's loyalty mission.
| NotCras chapter 19 . 4/12/2012
you kept me reading until the end, I love your writing style, and I loved this storyline... though I feel its not finished, think you'll ever finish it?
| Wulfenbach chapter 19 . 3/21/2012
could you perhaps finish this?
| Tikigod784 chapter 19 . 3/10/2012
Shepard is fleetmaster? Excellent...
Seriously though, I wanted to do exactly this after meeting the council in ME2...
| MP Enchanter chapter 19 . 12/8/2011
Awesome story. I never liked Samara's code, but it was better than having an incomplete character.
| Yoholic chapter 19 . 11/30/2011
| NonSolus chapter 19 . 10/7/2011
Masterful! It is always interesting to read explorations into renegade thinking. Keep them coming, this is riveting!
| Janizary chapter 19 . 8/17/2011
Excellent tale of imagination from end-to-end (Coup). I particularly liked the idea that 'subtle' indoctrination could have been at play on the Citadel itself.