|Reviews for Beautiful|
| Anne Bonham-Knightley chapter 1 . 12/4/2013
Beautiful is right! This is ABSOLUTLY AMAZING! It has such a great message and the writing style is just perfect for it even though I usually can't get into stories in second person I didn't even notice it because you worked it so well! Amaze balls 3 xx
| Kathleen Kelly chapter 1 . 12/3/2013
This is wonderful. I love how perfectly imperfect they are. You made Lily look like a real teenager, which is so rare in fanfiction. I like to see her being awkward and unsure of herself, I like to see her having doubts, having imperfect body and hairl, and stuff like that, because it makes her more real. It's more beautiful that way.
| unique.normality chapter 1 . 8/25/2013
This is great and totally paints them in a realistic way since they're often seen to be so perfect
| PeaceLoveHopeFaithBooks chapter 1 . 6/12/2013
"I think we're more beautiful, because we're real..."
I love that! Awesome one shot :)
| Bubbles of Colours chapter 1 . 5/18/2013
gosh... I don't know if I want a Sirius or a James xd Great one-shoot :D
| ifithasapulse chapter 1 . 5/12/2013
Great, fantastic. Your work is legendary, I swear.
| talsibalsi7 chapter 1 . 2/21/2013
love. this. now i am going to read all of your other pieces!
| UnlimitedThoughts chapter 1 . 2/17/2013
I LOVE LOVE LOVE this. 3 I've actually favorited this awhile ago, but I don't think I reviewed it (I know, terrible of me). Anyway, I just adore this story because you just grabbed the statement, "Imperfection is beauty." and you made it, just believable. And I love how you wrote Lily and James out. Thank you for this exquisite piece of writing! :D I LOVE it.
| C. L. Kellen chapter 1 . 12/27/2012
This is a ridiculously good story! I love it, especially how you compared Lily and James's relationship to that of Sirius's! :) Keep writing!
| anavihs chapter 1 . 9/30/2012
| MissEMT chapter 1 . 9/20/2012
amazing! Just pure, and utter amazing-ness.
| papercranesandplanes chapter 1 . 7/31/2012
God, what did you do to me... Scene after scene...and I don't know which one was better. This is one of the - like the title says - beautiful one shots on ff. Seriously. When he came to her dormitory after that OWL scene... Or when they produced the patronuses. Or when you described everything she likes about him and how he's her knight in the shiny armour... And, the last part... Ahhh! Amazing!
| Woodrokiro chapter 1 . 7/17/2012
My god, your writing is incredible. Excuse me as I spend this whole night stalking your pieces.
| Guest chapter 1 . 7/17/2012
| pagethreeninetyfour chapter 1 . 7/12/2012
stalking your stories right now but this was so goooood! and sirius/marlene on the side bless