Reviews for Sinister Chakra |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Yeah no. I know this fic hasn't been updated in a while but I've seen too many good reviews for this so I had to give it a read. First off, don't listen to them, this is garbage. The author introduced a few retcons which is normal, but there are a couple points that make you question whether or not this author ever read Naruto. China? Europe? Naruto is set in Japan? Really? China uses Chakra bending and Europe uses Chakra magic? You added an OC that is stronger than the 3rd Raikage and you introduced the force as a 6th element just to make the guy OP? Madara can use every Mangekyo Sharingan ability and this guy still lost to Hashirama? How? That's not how Kamui works... Obito doesn't enter "the soul world" and he cannot see souls in the Kamui dimension. He can't create weapons that damage the soul either... Second, this is a Konoha bashing story, with everything you can expect from it. The *evil council* that is everything wrong with the village. Kiba's mom is evil just because. Hiyashi traumatized Hinata and killed his brother in front of her and Neji because he defended his son. And now you want me to believe Hiyashi is a good guy? Really? Naruto got kicked out of the orphanage and was homeless at 5? And Hiruzen did nothing because *the evil council* didn't allow him? That's what Tobirama created the Anbu for, so that major clans wouldn't get a say in the village matters. Hiruzen left Naruto to eat out of garbage bins, steal for a living and get the ever living crap beaten out of him but he's *a kind old man*. Not to mention the horrendous pacing, the jarring back and forths in pov and horrible character writing. 0/10 regret reading |
![]() ![]() TBH so far this is the best/most original fanfic I remember reading! Kudos! |
![]() ![]() Seguirás la teoría? Es magnífica, síguela porfa |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ik it’s been years but let me rant plz. Japan? Europe? China? What im the world? The story us super slow. We keep cutting to Akatsuki for no reason at all. I get that you want to focus on natuto’s childhoos but the pacing is horrible. It’s too slow for the story you want to tell. And what is force? Why intorduce a 6th element, when we know that there are ninja who specialize in genjutusu. You made hinita shy but yet confrontational when she first met naruto why she change soo much? The only reason Hisashi treated hinaya like that in the original story was because hinita looked a lot like her mother. Making naruto the class dove makes no sense cause he mainly did that because he wanted attention and love, he has that now, no need for it. And if you really wanted the three to be together, you could do it and no one could really question it. Mangekyuo abilities are UNIQUE. Madara being able to use Amaterasu doesn’t. And according to your own charataization of madara, he would’ve shown himself to naruto by now. So many problems with this story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I was enjoying thr story till it became too crossover heavy for my taste |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great chapter thank you for your wonderful work |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great chapter thank you for your wonderful work |
![]() ![]() ![]() Bro no hate honestly you could have used a OC senju or tsunade as a plot twist like she was born right now instead of before the 1st ninja war Hinata here doesn’t act like her and her name is also different and her attitude was more like tsunade honestly |
![]() ![]() pls finish this its so good |
![]() ![]() ![]() Juss got to the part where I think Hinata first meets naruto. (Don’t know if it’s her haven’t read that far yet, saw this part and had to same something) and the forts think I thought when I read this part was “the heck type of hinata is this” her saying “hey” and talking like that caught me off guard. Since I am making a review right now, I might as well say it love the first chapter. Can’t wait to keep reading this. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I have to wonder is there a fic where the third doesn't completely fail to protect Naruto or even just ensure he gets the bare minimum of care and not constant abuse? |
![]() ![]() So uh, Naruto doesn't take place in Japan and China doesn't exist. This is established by the time you started writing this story. Add in the fact that we're 7 chapters in and he's still in the academy with Madara sealed inside of him and he knows basically nothing after years of dealing with that and being essentially a prodigy and it's just not connecting. It's a massive waste of time that you cut away to the Akatsuski, most of which doesn't make sense in the first place. Kimimaro was already under Orochimaru by this point in the series, you bring in an OC that is stronger than the Raikage, give the Rinnegan to someone who never would have been able to handle it because they're transplants and not naturally awoken, Hinata being essentially an OC just breaks the story and making her a Senju injects yet another set of OCs for her parents and nullifies the reason Tsunade left the village in the first place and relegated a freaking Senju to being an orphan. The story isn't horrible, but I haven't got far into it and I never will. This is where I'm closing this story due to the nonsensical choices, the heavy OC presence and dozens upon dozens of plot holes. |
![]() ![]() ![]() pls I need the update Im in terrible suspense here |
![]() ![]() ![]() Lol you uchiha ain't same chakra reserved as uzumaki |