Lol you uchiha ain't same chakra reserved as uzumaki

This fic is a masterpiece. Read through the whole thing in a few days and it's one of the best I've read on this site. Hopefully one day you'll return to give the story an ending it deserves but if not thanks for the awesome fic. Hope you're doing well!

Okay, so I know you said not to review about the rinnegan, but I'm only asking a question. I'm confused on how yahiko could live with the rinnegan. The only reason nagato was able to live was because of his uzumaki life force. I mean I get it's cool for someone else to have it, but said person doesn't have the Chakra or life force to handle the powers of the rinnegan

glad to see you back

am really sick of these cuts from the main story to introduce akatsuki members.
its just a watse of tim to come up with how each akatski member landed into the akatsuki,and i find it a bigger waste of time to read it.
lots of people read this story to see how naruto gets stronger with the help of madara and his sharingan.
so far all you've basically been writing about is naruto and hinata sneaking out. how many times naruto would embarrass himself for a girl. side characters and oc's no one cares about getting backstories.
Naruto has FREAKING MADARA INSIDE HIM.
SPEAKING TO HIM
but by the time he is genin he only knows like TWO JUTSU.
madara has basically full acces to naruto but has actualy DONE anything about that.
Am done with this story
ill just find another one

i see absolutely no point to raizo or introducing a sixth element

mabey i misread/missed something.
how does japan exist?
the elemental nations consists of five country
fire water wind earth and lightning and there is no land beyond that.
you saying the the sage of six paths brought peace ro japan implies that the elemental nations are inside japan
process that.
the elemental nations. 5 COUNTRIES.
inside JAPAN. which is 1 COUNTRY.
This story is messed up
naruto is so obsessed with hinata that he would appear to be class dobe for her,just because of the pairing?
U got the Atlas completly messed up.
And u so obsessed with naruhina that u would make her the "senju to his uchiha" which over complecates things and basicallly gives tsunade no reason to leave the village. beacause scince hinata was born,there senjus left and scince tsunade left before the kyuubi attack this elimina5s her reason for leaving.

but of course scince i have nothing else to do. ama continue reading this and find something elese to criticize you for.

yo. this chick aint hinata
i noticed you implied the pairing was naruto and hinata hyuga on the cover page. but u really shold have implied naruto and oc.

when u think of hinata,u think blue hair ,shy personality ,byakugan,not orphan.

but the hinata u mentioned is completly different,diffent hair different eyes different personality,different clan.
just wanted to point that out when you make another story.

Yeah I'm just gonna drop the fic now, honestly I should've done so over a dozen chapters ago. Reading about a mentally deranged Naruto being a hateful obsessed retard is just not interesting.

Tobirama inventing the shadow clone jutsu was also already known when this fic came out

Neji no longer considered himself a Hyuuga in an earlier chapter and literally uses the Hyuuga name as an insult, but now in a future vision or whatever he considers himself to be the only real Hyuuga?

And here comes the introduction of a generic random OC given his own entire arcs and chapters dedicated to him for no reason whatsoever

So the death of around 15-20 people, half of which are generic jonin and the other half might even be civilians, will leave the entire village defenceless and Kumo and Iwa will declare invade because of it. Normally I'd be sarcastic, but in this fic it would technically make sense considering that you made the population of one of the 5 great villages the size of a generic suburb.

So you nerfed/retconned Kotoamatsukami and made it a normal mangekyo ability while giving Shisui just a random generic unnamed hypnosis ability, and then you made Shisui force Itachi into slaughtering his clan while Itachi somehow doesn't actually want to even though he was going to in the first place and was why he fought Shisui in the first place?

Swift release already existed for about a year before this fic was invented, so I assume that you gave Minato the swift release bloodline on purpose instead of knowing the Hiraishin.