Wow that Sasuke x Guren pairing... That's amazing. I love it lol, I think it's perfect.

Uh-Oh. Looks like Neji'll be the Itachi in this story!

I wasn't gonna review, but you convinced me. I can already tell that I'll really enjoy reading this.

So first he is a genius but now he’s average which naruto is he he can’t be a prodigy and then become crap

NaruHina?

Cool

I’m just started and I already see Stormlight Archive references. I am intrigued and excited.

Man if I was treated like trash for all my life it’s basic knowledge I wouldn’t grow up right like I hate everything and I am one second from beating your bitch ass if some spoiled brat shoved me and made me muddy they are getting shoved back and BEATEN then I would dash it out of the village coz I will die if caught I hate these people don’t know basic psychology and thinking kids grow up right in that kind of environment

Why are sasuke and naruto so scary like wtf

i just wanted to say u are cool

This is so stupid

I really only have one critique for this story, Naruto is way to obsessed with Hinata, I understand this is your on story but almost every part that has Naruto’s POV is him thinking about Hinata great story though

Damn the dude really killed his own bro

good

MOKUTON HINATAAAAAAA