|Reviews for A Tale of Two Naples|
| Iklepixie chapter 1 . 10/5/2013
Found on . bless she sewmed relieved with the box content. I would have been disappointed
| TwiFanfictionRecs.com chapter 1 . 9/29/2013
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| lynzylee chapter 1 . 4/26/2011
| Cullenary chapter 1 . 2/27/2010
nice citrussy lemon there! and for a short story you covered ALOT! You got everyone a mention and a ton of real estate was crossed! And after finishing I felt like I'd known them for years! Great job Thanks for writing!
| D Pattinson chapter 1 . 2/22/2010
This was so cute. Though I'm not so sure why the hell Bella would want to go to Naple, Italy, it is like the ghetto of Italy. Now the not so long drive to Sorrento or Capri, that is a different story. Fucking beautiful! This was like the most classic case of miscommunication. LOL. Naples, Florida. Did Edward really expect her to fly back into the states for one weekend? LOL. Men are so dense sometimes. And obviously he had plenty of money to fly to her, so it makes it even funnier. I know they have connections there and all, I get it, it's sentimental, but it's still funny. I'm glad she agreed to move in with him. He seems like a really good guy.
| cclore chapter 1 . 2/21/2010
Now isn't Edward glad he didn't listen to Bella and went ahead to visit her anyway? And I think he more than made up for any confusion.
You are getting so good at these lemons that F&FS's lemon better be epic! LOL
No pressure! *kisses*
| ssherrill115 chapter 1 . 2/15/2010
I always think that the reason you aren't letting Bella and Edward "DO IT" in Fate and Forgotten Secrets is because you are really just scared to write a lemon. But you are REALLY GOOD at lemon writing! I loved this one shot! It was just what I needed to get me through this afternoon.
I have been really emo with all the bad stuff happening in the FF world. I hope I get my mojo back soon. For me to just leave updates un-opened is unheard of. But I enjoyed reading this o/s and hopefully I am on the road to recovery, and so are all my friends in the Wonderful World of TwiFic!
I love you and I thank you for everything you do. You are so sweet and precious and I don't know what I would do without you. You are my friend - my rock - and you answer all my silly questions! I appreciate you and I look forward to reading more of your stuff and working with you in the future!
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| trixietraci chapter 1 . 2/15/2010
Thus was so sweet. My heart hurt when they ended up being in 2 different cities, but I'm so glad Edward went to her even though she 'said' she didn't want him to. *sigh*
I was so sure the gift was going to be a ring... good job on the trickery there. :)
| jael728 chapter 1 . 2/15/2010
Like the concept of two Naples, i thought that was very clever.
Love the fact that she's studying in Paris, art history nonetheless, my girl.. my thing!
Edward knows her well enough to know to read between the lines of her bullshit. No means yes in women talk. Men, take notes. I thought that was romantic when he was at her door and said "I heard you loud and clear." a melt moment for me. He gets her.
I dig how he didn't ask her to marry him... that would be way too cliche for Vday. The symbolism of the keychain says it all... you have my heart, you have my home, you have my everything. LOVE IT.
| Teresa R chapter 1 . 2/14/2010
Happy V-day to you to thanks for the great little story I was forsure it was a ring to you are good.