|Reviews for Ad Initium|
| stars4redvines chapter 1 . 1/8
I love this story and how you approached writing Annabeth. It is so well written with not only how her life could turn out so differently and yet stay so similar but also Thalia's and Luke's... If that makes sense? I'm sorry but I don't think I have the words to give this story justice. I truly love this story and enjoyed reading it.
| Guest chapter 1 . 10/13/2016
Ouch. That swipe at West Virginia hurts. Honestly, that stereotype is very damaging. I may not be a real West Virginian, but I can still feel the negative effects of that. Please be more careful about those kind of things in the future.
| LittleRedWritingHood70 chapter 1 . 1/24/2016
I love this! This has got to be one of my favourite stories by you! :)
I think my favourite part of this story was the evident sisterly bond between Thalia and Annabeth. I found it incredibly heart warming to read about their life living with each other, comforting and advising each other in times of need, and always wishing for the best for each other. They always seem to wish for each other's happiness which was shown when Thalia advises Annabeth to visit her family and makes sure she goes to a good school and Annabeth deciding that Thalia's breakup was good for her because what's most important is that she feels comfortable and happy with herself. I wasn't expecting the Thaluke breakup but even though I ship them I like the way you conveyed that even though Thalia was a big influence on Luke's life and could prevent him from making terrible decisions, you can't completely change someone. (Or at least that's the message that I got from it.) I also enjoyed the message of how no matter how tough of a demigod you are, you still crave for love and , I really like the ending where Annabeth comments on Percy's drooling. ;)
| cristina rosales chapter 1 . 10/23/2015
A www! I really love how - even though this is an AU - you've got Percabeth, Goode, Rachel Dare, and sippers of Thalia and Luke in, not in a 'I have to fit this all in way' but a 'this flows like no other'
I love this fanfic so much!
| WiseGirl8.18 chapter 1 . 9/29/2015
Oh Gods, love it!
| AnonBryd chapter 1 . 6/30/2015
Firstly, this is brilliant and I want to read more, and secondly, there are a few errors here and there, but the one that I can remember the best is: "Annabeth takes his hand in hers; it's soft and unworn, and while she doesn't exactly feel electricity run through her when they touch, it's pretty damn close"
Which requires a period.
Other than stuff like that: it's awesome, and I would reaply like to read a whole fanfic like this.
| thepurpleotakutrashcan chapter 1 . 4/13/2015
You have won the Internet for the day with this fanfic!
| musichettta chapter 1 . 12/11/2014
YOU HAVE TO WRITE MORE. This is such a cute, realistic, sad, and altogether wonderful AU and probably one of the best I have read. Annabeth is in perfect character and Thalia and Luke act exactly how they would under the circumstances. This AU intriguese and I absolutely adore the ending! Please continue. ;)
| idontknow chapter 1 . 12/9/2014
Surprisingly pretty good
| Melanie chapter 1 . 10/20/2014
OMG that was seriously amazing! I loved it SO much. I actually love all your writing so much!
| Holly13 chapter 1 . 7/1/2014
I LOVE it! You are an amazing writer!
| PercabethxEverlarkxJessa chapter 1 . 6/23/2014
Absolutely amazing story! Everything about it is perfect
| Commander Bear chapter 1 . 6/9/2014
Brilliant. Really, I loved how you didn't make Percy THE jock or something like I've seen other people do. I'm just curious about Nico. Did he go to Hillcrest with Annabeth? If he did how did he pay for it? And if he doesn't what was he doing there?
| sorrydontgotacoolusername chapter 1 . 5/29/2014
This is perfect! Please continue!
| Random chapter 1 . 5/18/2014
I really, really, really want you to continue this. IT IS SO GOOD! Especially the end bit with Percy and Annabeth.