Reviews for A fiery year
Ultra Indulgence chapter 1 . 7/12/2015
You have a good premise for your story but then you become rather repetitive in your plots and your characters- it's all becoming a bit flimsy as you can adding random elements rather than fleshing out already your original. Also, by not checking your work for grammatical errors it ruins the work as people have to go back and re-read the work with the correct words.
kitty chapter 12 . 6/21/2015
Good story. Just two words...spell check. All the misspellings and wrong words make it hard to read.
honore chapter 23 . 8/14/2014
I loved it. There were a quite a few usage, grammar and spelling issues, but your ability to tell a story outweighed that. Please continue to write. Thanks
David chapter 23 . 8/9/2014
I liked it a lot. It's spelled "amazed" by the way, not "amassed". But other than the grammar errors it was really good- I liked the sorting hat's song at the end. Cheers!
UC chapter 23 . 6/16/2014
awesome story and a cool ending.
Roses Wrath chapter 23 . 3/29/2014
I love it! It's PERFECT!
elvander72 chapter 23 . 3/9/2014
Loved these two stories. Couldn't stop once I started reading.
Laesk chapter 23 . 10/11/2013
brilliant stories, thank you for sharing them with us
Loopy Lottie chapter 23 . 8/2/2013
REALLY GOOD! I really enjoyed reading both this story and a quidditch summer, absolutley brilliant! can't wait to read the rest of your stories! xxxx - LexieS123
thisiscorinth chapter 23 . 4/6/2013
Yayyyy! Good story!
Paladin Nox chapter 23 . 3/26/2013
This is a really great story. One of the better stories I have come across. Thank you for sharing
Aleazanna chapter 23 . 3/20/2013
I have read both this story and its prequel and I love them both. I will say however that the spelling and use of antonyms sometimes makes it hard to read.
ILoveGeorgeEads chapter 23 . 3/18/2013
i loved loved was great.
Oogies4u chapter 23 . 2/23/2013
I so did enjoy the story. Again .. if you want a beta to help you with the spelling let me know :)
thugalet chapter 23 . 2/11/2013
I liked the idea behind this fic and it's prequel, my only complaint is all the spelling errors. They made it really hard to read the fic because I wasn't always sure what you were trying to say. Maybe you should look into getting a Beta reader who can give you an extra pair of eyes to look over your stuff.
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