Reviews for Virgin Kisses
sunligh584 chapter 1 . 7/16/2010
Wonderful great story it was amazing thank you for writing it. :)
Fire chapter 1 . 2/18/2010
Wow, gotta love that thing! O

Absolutly hot and to second Matt: Yepp, definitly cunning little bitches... xD But hey, he cant say he didnt get what he wanted!

I really liked the way you wrote this one, perfect to imagine and the different relationships fit very good (Phil & Jeff as devious best friends - couldnt be better, could it? ;-P)
EnigmaticWriterWorld chapter 1 . 2/17/2010
Wow, this is really good. I want to try to do a Matt and Punk slash. I gotta finish my "Junk" first.
Terrahfry chapter 1 . 2/17/2010
“You know, that day in February that everyone waits all anxiously for only to have it fuck up in their face?” Hehe, that's Valentine's Day for ya, Philly. XD.

Ooh, ouch *hisses* Matt's a sore subject for dear Philip.

Damn, you made Punkers sound hott! And Jeff...? Uhm.. *shudders* Delicious as always!

Punk and Jeff are kinda cute as friends. I dun support them personally as a couple, but they're cute as friends.

C'mon, Jeffers, ya has to lust after someone.. Hehe..

Matt is sexy as hell fire, baby! XD! Oh, yeah!

"Matt (yum), Jay (Adorable), Chris (Hott), Adam Copeland (God-Like Material.)" Sums it up :P Agreed to the fullest! XD!

Terrah approves too! Not often I agree w/ Punkers in a fic.. This is becoming a nasty habit though..

THONG! XD! That's it, make Jeff look available! *giggles*

Poor Jeffy :P

Run, Philly, RUN! XD!

Holy shit, Phil landed on Matt!

Phil a good boy? Ha! Good one! XP.

And he's straddling Matt!

And hiding behind Matt! Lol!

Crayola! Ha! XP!

Ooh, Addy's checking Jeffy out, XD. Me likes! Me likes a lot!

“Brooks,” Jeff spat, “The little Straight-Edge slut.” Yus, him. XP.

“Hey!” Phil whined, “I’m no more a slut than you are!” *giggles*

Hyper cats! Lol!

"Squeaks and growls and whines and whimpers could be heard" Gah, sounds wonderful, XD.

“I like Crayola. He looks like he’d be a feisty little shit.” XD! WIN!

"Did you want me to say Phil so that you and Jeff could have your little incest thing go on? Uh-uh,” Adam's always on Hardycest :P

"Adam shook his head while sticking his tongue out childishly, “That Cherry belongs to me.” I'll take either pairings.. ;) But, I'd rather have Jedam :P

Oh, god! *fanning* Adam's killing me here! That dirty ass mouth! Yum! XD!

Oh, shit, Matt, just go for the twink.. uh, I mean Phil..

LOL! Adam reads the brother's journals! So Adam! XD. Sleaze-ball! Just how I like him. XP.

“I wanked off for a good while reading Jeff’s stuff.” *gulps* Imma need a cold shower on his dirty talk alone, hun, XD. Those are pretty images.

Addy giving Jeffy a ride, checking him out. And Jeff, so coy taking off tha shirt.. Little tart :P

*squeals* Sleepy Jeffy!

When Momma's away, Addy will play :P

Adam just told Matt he was gonna pop Jeff? Jeez, that hardly ever happens w/out Matt killing Addy... or threatening to.. Imma liking it, XD.

Jeffers is faking :P

Play up the ruse, Philly, hehe..

Get him, Philip, XP.

“Hey! She said she was sixteen.” Excuses! XD!

Bye-bye, buttons. XP.

And they're naked! Yay for nudity! :P

Yup, Matty's ego swelled alright! He's gonna break Phil in half! XD!

Damn! XD!

Slowly.. very slowly.. I am warming up to Matt/Phil.. This was so effing hott, XD!

*giggles* Phil just let Matt in on their little plot :P Cunning? Oh, yes.

I LOVE Adam watching Jeff. XD.

Adam knows Jeff isn't so innocent.

O.o Uh-ohs, Jeff attacks! Lol!

Kiss him, Addy! Oh, yes! Well, who wouldn't melt into that kiss? XD.

Bye-bye fishnet :P

Fave fishnet or not, it died for a good cause. Sacrifices must be made!

Jeff sucking on Adam! XD! Fuck, yeah! XD! I lurvs it, I needs it, I wants it, I craves it! *giggles insanely*

Adam's so fucking arrogant :P

Adam's the king of filthy talk! It's official! Gah! That's some awesome command!

Fuck, that blowjob! *drooling* Beautiful!

Gawd, you're killing me with this! It's so hott, my eyes are almost melting! Shit! XD!

“You’re not shooting that stuff anywhere but my ass,” *shudders* Yes'um, XP.

No thong for you, Adam! Ha!

Ride him! Fucking ride him! *twitching desperately*

"Number one: He wanted Jeff to get pissed. And number two: his dick was so ready for it." Awesome reasons, XP.

Bounce on him! XD! Hott damn!

Fucking hott ride! Oh, yeah, XD!

*sighs happily* It worked perfectly ;)

That's some mission :P

Oh, god, this was awesome! Shamefully, I regret it wasn't written for me *pouts playfully* XP. JK ;) I miss you writing Jedam! I fricken love when you write them! Please, PLEASE, write some more of them? *begs* Pwease? *puppy dog eyes*

Anyways, it was a good fix for my annoying little addiction :P *loves* So, Imma go take that cold shower now.. *off to do that*

-Terrah
Magz86 chapter 1 . 2/15/2010
:-D

That was great!

Loved it!
JacktheSinister JaketheJust chapter 1 . 2/15/2010
Love it! I don't have too much time to give a good long review but it's great! I love that they had a good Valentine's Day!
redsandman99 chapter 1 . 2/15/2010
I think everyone won in this situation :)
TheMizMagnet chapter 1 . 2/15/2010
WOO! So hot! I loved it, great job. Phil and Jeff are so cunning... It's adorable. :3

Great job!

.: TMM :.
Esha Napoleon chapter 1 . 2/15/2010
LOVE IT!
CodyRhodesFan chapter 1 . 2/15/2010
Vawentine's Day! X3!

Phil. The wiseass. XD!

Matt bangs a lot...hmm...

I'm sorry, Phil? Jeffro knows Philzers haz a crush.

Shit laptop. -_-

Who can get over Matt? O.O. XD!

Phil was a slut! YAY! XD!

Jeffro in purple! X3!

God like Matt! XD!

Oh mah God! I know Jeffro's position. Mah 'hot' is mah fwiends's 'not'. XD!

FUGLEH! I LOVE THAT WORD! X3!

Phil knowz!

Jeff knew his brother was delicious. -screams Hardycest.

LMFAO!

Copeland! XD! Phil approves. X3!

Phil knows Jeff was wearing a thong. How? I'm beginning to know... XD!

Jeff is gonna break Philleh's face!

Jeffeh is steamed. it's so cute on him. XD! Not as cute as you though. ;)

FELL ON MATT! YEZ!

YAY!

Jeff chasing around Phil is GOLD.

Crayola. I LOVE CWAYONS! X3

Straight-Edge slut...we love him slut-like. XD!

Phil! XD!

Kittehs! X3!

Adam! XD! Incest! You know you'll like it. X3! Cherry. X3!

Virgin Jeffeh! XD!

"...have you no morals?" XD!

Twink. Phil's a twink.

So explicit. XD!

I WANNA READ!

Best fwiends & virgins. Adam haz a plot!

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Rings. I can't stand rings on mah fingers.

Sweeping Jeff.

Haha. ALONE.

Pop your brother. XD! Go ahead, Adam. ENJOY.

Jeff is doing something...

I wonder...

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GOT HIM! NICE! XD!

Projects. -_-

You & I should play around too. OH MAH GOD. CHIPMUNK PLAYING! O.O.

ALL 'CAUSE OF THE GOLDEN DIARY!

I must dye.

Phil is good at this stuff... O.O. Hell, I'd sleep with him.

Jeffro! XD!

Matt & Phil play. DEBATE.

Wow. PHIL HIT HIM. XD!

Said she was sixteen, XD!

OH MAH GOD.

IZ THAT A KIZZ?

I GO DYE!

THEN COME BACK!

Beautiful kizz. O.O.

Ripped shirt. O.O.

Naked. O.O.

"Getting it nice & wet." -reminds meh of Something In Your Mouth. XD!

"Oh my God! You fucking horse! This is never gonna fit!" OH MAH GOD. LMAO. XD!

Laughing. XD!

Sucked you off. "You're so much cuter when you never pull it out, 'cause you look so much cuter, with something in your mouth..." XD! *insertmusicthinghere* XD!

TIGHT PHIL! THE WORLD IS RIGHT! XD!

Phil gigglez. X3!

"Cunning little bitches."

"You know it, babe." -Phil got attitude! XD!

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Innocent.

Jeff! XD! "You...you read my...you read my journal?" this is why I never have a journal. Be full of vivid descriptions of YOU, mah babeh. X3! Hell, I bet I'd be worse than Jeff iz. XD!

Jeff. WITH A LOT OF ATUDE.

Fiesty. X3! The word I love using.

Adam's arrogance was a thing to be admired. XD!

"Hey pretty lady with the pretty pink thong..." *insertmusicthinghere* wait. "Hey pretty lady with the pretty purple thong..." Wow. Changed the lyric of an entire song. XD!

WITH ATTITUDE. "You're not shooting that stuff anywhere but my ass." XD!

Jeff to get pissed. Who'd want that? XD!

That worked nicely.

Nothing. XD!

As little virgins. Cute. XD!

Who would after that? XD!

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MY LIFE.

MY KASSEH.

MY DAHL.

MY VIOLET.

MY CARNATION.

XD! Mah birthday? It's... around two months away. XD!

I LOVE YOU.

I LOVE YOU.

I LOVE YOU.

I LOVE YOU.

I LOVE YOU.

I LOVE YOU.

I LOVE YOU.

I LOVE YOU.

I LOVE YOU.

I LOVE YOU.

I LOVE YOU.

I LOVE YOU.

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WITH LOVE,

X Sam.
Guest chapter 1 . 2/15/2010
Well I guess Jeff and Phil showed them. And everyone enjoyed thier Valentines Day!
GrandpasGuitars chapter 1 . 2/14/2010
Damn, it was yum. I loved it. Jeff and Punk are a little devious, but eh, whatever it takes, right? As for Matt and Edge- I say they still win, because they got them.