|Reviews for Child of the Desert|
| Corax2009 chapter 1 . 2/15/2010
No reviewers yet? Well, my privilege...
Solid prose. The opening grabbed my curiosity just enough to get me to keep reading.
The ending is a little mysterious. Unless someone is inclined toward dark and mysterious temples, people may forget to come back to check for an update. But anyway...
Your philosophical run on time and wind was nice. You did it without sounding stilted. Kudos to that in particular.
Hope you keep writing.